[COMPLETE]Some Articles About Mark Twain - dlo

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Post by DrPGould » October 19th, 2017, 1:54 pm

John:

Section 2 is also nicely read but there is a technical issue, one note and a suggestion:

technical--checker clocked this at 97.9 db. The range is 86-92.

note at 1:53 I heard "read dark brick" : I expected "dark red brick"

suggestion at 2:29 I heard "is half concealed" : the text reads "in half concealed" --I would suggest not altering this--I think there is a typo in the text. However, it's up to you.

Enjoyed your reading.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by johng » October 19th, 2017, 3:03 pm

DrPGould wrote:John:

Section 2 is also nicely read but there is a technical issue, one note and a suggestion:

technical--checker clocked this at 97.9 db. The range is 86-92.

note at 1:53 I heard "read dark brick" : I expected "dark red brick"

suggestion at 2:29 I heard "is half concealed" : the text reads "in half concealed" --I would suggest not altering this--I think there is a typo in the text. However, it's up to you.

Enjoyed your reading.

Many thanks,

Philip
Thanks for the audio check!!!! I'd TOTALLY FORGOTTEN to do the audio check!
Will make corrections and make the audio right!
Tnx!
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Post by johng » October 21st, 2017, 8:37 am

DrPGould wrote:John:

Section 2 is also nicely read but there is a technical issue, one note and a suggestion:

technical--checker clocked this at 97.9 db. The range is 86-92.

note at 1:53 I heard "read dark brick" : I expected "dark red brick"

suggestion at 2:29 I heard "is half concealed" : the text reads "in half concealed" --I would suggest not altering this--I think there is a typo in the text. However, it's up to you.

Enjoyed your reading.

Many thanks,

Philip
I've decided to leave the typo correction at 2:29...there's no way it works with the typo in place.
That's one of the things I've been trying to do with ALL the MT writings....make obvious corrections, wherever possible.
But please don't hesitate to continue asking!
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Post by johng » October 21st, 2017, 8:54 am

Chap 2 AND chap one have both been corrected to just over 88db...and sent in

Chap 2 has been corrected
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Post by johng » October 21st, 2017, 9:20 am

chapter 3 is ready and sent in
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Post by johng » October 22nd, 2017, 6:23 am

Chapter 4 is ready
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 6:38 am

John:

Chapter 2 is PL OK! So are Chapters 3 & 4! Well done! :clap:

It has been a privilege to work with you on this project. See you on the boards.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by dlolso21 » October 23rd, 2017, 3:18 pm

John,

Since you used the "London World", do you want to adjust the summary to reflect that as a source?

I don't know how much difference there is between the two versions, except that the "London World" credits one if it's editors as the author while the "Literature. Weekly Magazine" does not give any author.

David O

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Post by johng » October 23rd, 2017, 3:49 pm

dlolso21 wrote:John,

Since you used the "London World", do you want to adjust the summary to reflect that as a source?

I don't know how much difference there is between the two versions, except that the "London World" credits one if it's editors as the author while the "Literature. Weekly Magazine" does not give any author.

David O
good idea.
I've made an adjustment....will that do??
Or maybe I misunderstood??
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Post by johng » October 23rd, 2017, 3:51 pm

DrPGould wrote:John:

Chapter 2 is PL OK! So are Chapters 3 & 4! Well done! :clap:

It has been a privilege to work with you on this project. See you on the boards.

Many thanks,

Philip
thank YOU Philip, for your speedy and very perceptive corrections!!!

:-)
-j
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Post by dlolso21 » October 23rd, 2017, 4:13 pm

John,

I like that summary. I am going to catalog this to show each author and original source so Edmund Yates gets his credit.

David O

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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 4:25 pm

It was a privilege and a pleasure to work with you both on this project. I hope our paths cross again!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by dlolso21 » October 23rd, 2017, 4:55 pm

John and Phillip,

Thank you for sharing your time and talents, and for your patience with me!!

This project is in the Librivox Catalog: https://librivox.org/some-articles-about-mark-twain-by-various/

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Post by johng » October 24th, 2017, 5:27 am

dlolso21 wrote:John,

I like that summary. I am going to catalog this to show each author and original source so Edmund Yates gets his credit.

David O
David,
Thank you for finding an Edmund Yates reference!!
I was unable to.
How did you find it??
-j
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Post by dlolso21 » October 24th, 2017, 2:44 pm

John,

He has a Wikipedia page; that page states he was an editor and frequent writer for “The London.”

David O

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