COMPLETE[BIO] Pinero, Playwright by Hamilton Fyfe - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » April 21st, 2019, 1:33 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » April 28th, 2019, 10:57 am

Thanks, Elsie. Finally found some time to PL your section. Sorry for the delay. There are a few things that need to be addressed:

1:47 Missing sentence: "The second act certainly does not disappoint us."
9:31 Missing sentence: "Interesting as The Benefit of the Doubt is, it must be seen upon the stage to be fully appreciated." Also in the same place there is a bad take of "Yet it has never been acted in London except..." that you forgot to remove. I suspect you cut out the good sentence instead of the bad one.

16:48 False start and long pause need to be cut: "But the scene in which Agnes hurls the Bible into the stove..."
17:08-17:17 Two false starts of "If Agnes had ever been convinced..."
18:17 Cut false start: "When she cries out that she had trusted..."
21:04 False start: "Her love for Lucas persuades her to throw them over..."
23:20-23:40 There are two takes of "I suspected this... Oh, proved it" through "more temperate, more impassive." I'd cut the first one, personally. I think the second was better.

You may already know this trick, but an easy way to handle these is to start at the end and work your way up from the bottom of the list. That way, the time stamps don't change and each problem spot will be easier for you to find.

elsieselwyn · Post by **elsieselwyn** » April 28th, 2019, 7:17 pm

Here is section 9 fixed:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/pineroplaywright_09_fyfe_128kb.mp3

Length: 27:00

Just to help you spot PL

:

9:31 has moved to 9:34

16:48 -> 16:51

17:08 -> 17:03

18:17 -> 18:03

21:04 -> 20:44

23:20 -> 22:52

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 3rd, 2019, 12:07 pm

Thanks for the new times, Elsie. Makes my job easier.

PL ok now!

lubee930 · Post by **lubee930** » June 2nd, 2019, 7:16 am

Hi Todd--May I please claim Section 6 - "Satire"--? Thanks!

Post by **ToddHW** » June 5th, 2019, 6:06 pm

Thank you.

Todd

lubee930 · Post by **lubee930** » June 23rd, 2019, 8:43 pm

Hi--Here is my Section 06 - Satire:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/pineroplaywright_06_fyfe_128kb.mp3
44:40

Post by **ToddHW** » June 24th, 2019, 3:20 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 6th, 2019, 11:23 am

lubee930 wrote: ↑June 23rd, 2019, 8:43 pm Hi--Here is my Section 06 - Satire:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/pineroplaywright_06_fyfe_128kb.mp3
44:40

Nice work, Lucretia! Very well done, and PL ok.

Post by **ToddHW** » July 6th, 2019, 4:14 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » July 31st, 2019, 9:19 am

I am going to claim the last section of this so we can finish it off.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » August 2nd, 2019, 10:54 am

Drat. Drat. Drat. Section 8, the last section, and which I just recorded, has three short quote passages in French. And my French is sadly non-existent. Not even worth having the mic turned on for.

Does anyone want to record the French passages on pages 130, 131-132, and 151 so I can cut them into the chapter? (Bearing in mind that this is not PD outside the US.) You shall earn my eternal gratitude.

Disgusted by my inadequacies francais, Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » August 2nd, 2019, 11:26 am

Darn. My French is not worth last year's leftovers, so I'm afraid I can't help.

Post by **ToddHW** » August 2nd, 2019, 12:12 pm

I posted a plea in the Orphans topic.

Thanks, Todd

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » August 8th, 2019, 3:06 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2019, 10:54 am Drat. Drat. Drat. Section 8, the last section, and which I just recorded, has three short quote passages in French. And my French is sadly non-existent. Not even worth having the mic turned on for.

Does anyone want to record the French passages on pages 130, 131-132, and 151 so I can cut them into the chapter? (Bearing in mind that this is not PD outside the US.) You shall earn my eternal gratitude.

Disgusted by my inadequacies francais, Todd

Bonjour, Todd!
I will be happy to record the French sections for you.