[COMPLETE] The Silver Bullet by Fergus Hume - kd
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Chapter 11 is ready for review.
I made a change in the opening paragraph on order to make it more understandable to a listener. Let me know is you think this is a problem.
Thanks
Richard
I made a change in the opening paragraph on order to make it more understandable to a listener. Let me know is you think this is a problem.
Thanks
Richard
"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." (Martin Luther King Jr.)
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I noticed the change and think it is fine.
I noticed those 2 alphabet lines when I brought up the chapter and was quite curious to hear how you would read them successfully. I think your idea is the best. Reading them as printed would have confused listeners.
Max
I noticed the change and think it is fine.
I noticed those 2 alphabet lines when I brought up the chapter and was quite curious to hear how you would read them successfully. I think your idea is the best. Reading them as printed would have confused listeners.
Max