COMPLETE[POETRY] Challenge by Louis Untermeyer-ag

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Post by silverquill » October 22nd, 2017, 1:57 pm



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Post by MatthewRyanRoss » October 22nd, 2017, 2:25 pm

Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross

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Post by silverquill » October 22nd, 2017, 6:11 pm

MatthewRyanRoss wrote:Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross
I've given you Sections 21,22,23

Just a hint - it is a lot easier for the BC if you claim by section number. But, glad to have you reading for this project.

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Post by MatthewRyanRoss » October 23rd, 2017, 9:08 am

silverquill wrote:
MatthewRyanRoss wrote:Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross
I've given you Sections 21,22,23

Just a hint - it is a lot easier for the BC if you claim by section number. But, glad to have you reading for this project.
I will keep that in mind. Thank you so much!

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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:22 am

Larry:

Sections 1 and 7 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:46 am

Aniroo:

Sections 3 & 15 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:47 am

Bill:

Section 5 is PL-OK. Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:48 am

Ken:

Sections 20 and 35 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 24th, 2017, 2:54 pm

Larry:

Section 2 is PL-OK! Nicely done!

(An interesting prayer, as well.)

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by bluechien » October 24th, 2017, 6:07 pm

Eva D
PLers: pls correct pronunciation!

Sooner or later I too may passively take the print
Of the golden age— why not? ...

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Post by DrPGould » October 24th, 2017, 9:28 pm

Eva:

Sections 8 & 47 are both PL-OK! Nicely done! You really unleashed the power of these poems.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 28th, 2017, 11:21 am

Larry:

Sections 40 and 54 are PL-OK! Nicely done.

One small thing in Section 12--at 11:00 the word "the" is inserted before the phrase torpid ease.

In Section 16, at 0:14 I heard "Listen to my lute" instead of "Listen, my lute"
at 0:52 I heard "and as fierce" instead of "as fierce"
In Section 37 at 0:13; 0:37, 0:48 and 1:04 the word "I" is omitted in front of the phrase "do not envy God."

All were very expressively read and a pleasure to hear.

Many thanks,

Philip
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