COMPLETE[POETRY] Challenge by Louis Untermeyer-ag

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Post by silverquill » October 22nd, 2017, 1:57 pm



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Post by MatthewRyanRoss » October 22nd, 2017, 2:25 pm

Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross

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Post by silverquill » October 22nd, 2017, 6:11 pm

MatthewRyanRoss wrote:Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross
I've given you Sections 21,22,23

Just a hint - it is a lot easier for the BC if you claim by section number. But, glad to have you reading for this project.

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Post by MatthewRyanRoss » October 23rd, 2017, 9:08 am

silverquill wrote:
MatthewRyanRoss wrote:Hello!

May I please claim the following sections:

Folk Song
In the Streets
Envy

Thank you so much!

Matthew Ryan Ross
I've given you Sections 21,22,23

Just a hint - it is a lot easier for the BC if you claim by section number. But, glad to have you reading for this project.
I will keep that in mind. Thank you so much!

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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:22 am

Larry:

Sections 1 and 7 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:46 am

Aniroo:

Sections 3 & 15 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:47 am

Bill:

Section 5 is PL-OK. Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » October 23rd, 2017, 10:48 am

Ken:

Sections 20 and 35 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by DrPGould » October 24th, 2017, 2:54 pm

Larry:

Section 2 is PL-OK! Nicely done!

(An interesting prayer, as well.)

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by bluechien » October 24th, 2017, 6:07 pm

Eva D
PLers: pls correct pronunciation!

“But take my advice, when you meet anything that's going to be human and isn't yet, or used to be human once and isn't now, or ought to be human and isn't, you keep your eyes on it and feel for your hatchet.”

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Post by DrPGould » October 24th, 2017, 9:28 pm

Eva:

Sections 8 & 47 are both PL-OK! Nicely done! You really unleashed the power of these poems.

Many thanks,

Philip


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Post by DrPGould » October 28th, 2017, 11:21 am

Larry:

Sections 40 and 54 are PL-OK! Nicely done.

One small thing in Section 12--at 11:00 the word "the" is inserted before the phrase torpid ease.

In Section 16, at 0:14 I heard "Listen to my lute" instead of "Listen, my lute"
at 0:52 I heard "and as fierce" instead of "as fierce"
In Section 37 at 0:13; 0:37, 0:48 and 1:04 the word "I" is omitted in front of the phrase "do not envy God."

All were very expressively read and a pleasure to hear.

Many thanks,

Philip

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