COMPLETE[POETRY] Challenge by Louis Untermeyer-ag

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Stanvax
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Post by Stanvax » October 14th, 2017, 6:39 am

Thanks for your advice - very helpful - I’ll get to work on that

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Post by aniroo » October 14th, 2017, 8:47 pm

I'd also like Sections #13 and #14 please.

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Post by Stanvax » October 15th, 2017, 12:13 pm

May I request #20 and #35 please

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Post by NemoR » October 15th, 2017, 1:59 pm

May I also claim these sections please:

33 Haunted
46 Strikers

Thank you,

Nemo
Nemo

‘By not holding to fixed views,
The pure-hearted one, having clarity of vision,
Being freed from all sense-desires,
Is not born again into this world.’

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Post by silverquill » October 15th, 2017, 6:21 pm

All requests have been put into the MW. Thank you all. :thumbs: 8-)

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Post by NemoR » October 15th, 2017, 9:24 pm

Nemo

‘By not holding to fixed views,
The pure-hearted one, having clarity of vision,
Being freed from all sense-desires,
Is not born again into this world.’

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Post by silverquill » October 15th, 2017, 10:08 pm


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Post by DrPGould » October 16th, 2017, 8:07 am

Nemo:

Sections 33 & 46 are PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by DrPGould » October 16th, 2017, 11:10 am

Aniroo:

Sections 13, 48, and 53 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :thumbs:

In Section 14 at approximately 0:16 I heard "in silence in the street"; I expected "in silence in the little street"

In Section 45 at approximately 2:29 I heard "streets shuddering Lawrence" I expected "streets of shuddering Lawrence."

I enjoyed your reading!

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by DrPGould » October 17th, 2017, 7:40 am

Aniroo:

Nicely done! Sections 14 & 45 are PL-OK! :thumbs:

Many thanks,

Philip

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Post by NemoR » October 19th, 2017, 7:27 pm

Nemo

‘By not holding to fixed views,
The pure-hearted one, having clarity of vision,
Being freed from all sense-desires,
Is not born again into this world.’

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Post by silverquill » October 19th, 2017, 9:13 pm

Thanks! In the MW Ready for PL.

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