COMPLETE[POETRY] Challenge by Louis Untermeyer-ag

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Stanvax
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Thanks for your advice - very helpful - I’ll get to work on that
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Post by aniroo »

I'd also like Sections #13 and #14 please.

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May I request #20 and #35 please
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May I also claim these sections please:

33 Haunted
46 Strikers

Thank you,

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Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
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All requests have been put into the MW. Thank you all. :thumbs: 8-)
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Nemo

Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
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~ Larry
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aniroo :wink:
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Nemo:

Sections 33 & 46 are PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip
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~ Larry
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Aniroo:

Sections 13, 48, and 53 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :thumbs:

In Section 14 at approximately 0:16 I heard "in silence in the street"; I expected "in silence in the little street"

In Section 45 at approximately 2:29 I heard "streets shuddering Lawrence" I expected "streets of shuddering Lawrence."

I enjoyed your reading!

Many thanks,

Philip
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aniroo :wink:
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Aniroo:

Nicely done! Sections 14 & 45 are PL-OK! :thumbs:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Nemo

Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
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Thanks! In the MW Ready for PL.
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