COMPLETE [SOLO] The Rock Frog by Harriet Cheever - dl

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Lmnei
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Noʻu ka hauʻoli! :)

I look forward to getting your reviews tomorrow!

Mahalo!
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Lynda:

Section 5 is PL-OK. Nicely done!

Section 3: the phrase "as the rock frog looked" occurs at 9:07 and is repeated at 9:09.

Section 4: At 13:32 I heard "Boom-Room" I expected to hear "Boom-a-Room"
At 13:55 I heard "Now should the only thing" I expected "Now should the one"

Many thanks!

Philip
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Hi Phillip -

Sorry for the delay - we took a side trip to Lanai and I needed to recover from the sea crossing - it was very choppy which did not bother me from a stomach point of view (they did pass out sea sick bags to those who needed them and there were quite a few) however it did bother my back (I have disk issues) so I have not been in a recording mood for a couple of days!

Better now :)

Here are Sections 3 and 4 back with their fixes -

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_03_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 11:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_04_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 14:49

Have a good day tomorrow!
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Hey Phillip -

I just keep jumping along in the book -

Here is Chapter 8 for your PL duties :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_08_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 15:12

Have a good night -
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Hi Phillip!

I am done! Whahooo!!! :clap:

Here are the last 2 sections - looking forward to your feedback as always :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_09_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 13:38
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_10_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 15:34
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Lynda!

Thanks so much for all your reading! I will try over the next couple of days to catch up with the PL-ing!

Ever forward,

Philip
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Lynda:

Here are the notes for sections 6 & 7:

Section 6

At 13:01, the phrase "I was bound" should be removed (possibly part of an earlier take.)

Section 7:

At 0:38 I heard "godly numbers" instead of "goodly numbers"
At 4:19 "What might not happen" is repeated at 4:22
At 6:09 "bearing the noise" is corrected to "hearing the noise at 6:10
At 6:29 I heard "quite little small foreigners" instead of "quite like small foreigners"
At 9:20 "but on no plan" repeated at 9:25

Many thanks for your reading.

Philip
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Hi Phillip!

Thanks so much for the feedback! I have done all the edits you mentioned. Here are the new files -

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_06_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 14:20
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_07_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 12:12

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Lynda:

Sections 6 & 7 are PL-OK!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Lynda:

Section 8 is PL-Ok! Nicely done!

Note for Section 9:

At 11:17 "and did not" repeats at 11:19.

Notes for Section 10:

At 0:26 "Chapter 10" is missing.

At 11:12 "Except to say that" repeats at 11:28.

The end is near!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Hi Phillip -

The edits are done for Chapters 9 and 10! We I hope are done now! :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_09_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 13:36
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rockfrog_10_cheever_128kb.mp3 - 15:29

Have an EXCELLENT day!
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Lynda:

Sections 9 & 10 are PL-OK. You are done!!!! Congratulations.

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Many thanks,

Philip
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David:

The sections are read and PL'd. Time for your magic touch.

Thank you for the privilege of working with you on this project!

Philip
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Thank you Philip and Lynda Marie, for a job well done. :clap:

This project is now complete!
All audio files can be found on our catalog page:
http://librivox.org/the-rock-frog-by-harriet-anna-cheever/
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