Act 3 is now PL ok, the volume seems better now as well. Thanks.Elizabby wrote:Repeat cut out, compression settings changed. New file is a bit shorter at 16:45.
Only one note for Act 2:And here's Act 2. I tried to keep the volume reasonable!
> at 15:58: "If you stop that letter, walk out of the house." - this remark didn't make much sense to me, Paula wouldn't have the power to throw Aubrey out of his own house. So on a hunch I checked the original archive scan and indeed, it is a Gutenberg error. The correct sentence should be: If you stop that letter, I walk out of the house. This threat makes much more sense in the context.
Source: https://archive.org/stream/secondmrstanquer00pineuoft#page/86/mode/2up (bottom of page 86)
Other than that, all flawlessly read. And I especially love the final scene where Paula really screams out in despair and lets out all her frustration on Aubrey.