COMPLETE [poetry] The White Sail by Louise Imogen Guiney -ck
Fixed, thank you!
Carolin
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Section 14, 2 minutes and 15 seconds:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_14_guiney.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_14_guiney.mp3
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And section 22, 1 minute 30:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_22_guiney.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_22_guiney.mp3
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Carolin
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Carolin,silverquill wrote:I'd like to take on The White Sail, section 1, and also 16,17 if I may.
Since Section One, "The White Sail," is over 3,500 words, would you like the regular long LV disclaimer? I'll do whatever you deem best.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Thanks for asking, larry we will stick to the short disclaimer though, as this is a poem. I only start poetry projects with the long disclaimer when the first section is not a poem. Thank you!
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Here are the two shorter poems. I have The White Sail ready to edit.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_17_guiney_128kb.mp3 2:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_18_guiney_128kb.mp3 0:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_17_guiney_128kb.mp3 2:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_18_guiney_128kb.mp3 0:58
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
I would like to claim sections 35, 36, 37, 38, 39 and 40.
Thanks,
Bruce.
Thanks,
Bruce.
Thank you all
Carolin
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The White Sail
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_01_guiney_128kb.mp3 29:06
More challenging than I had thought. The line structure of the poems made the phrasing difficult, so it seems a bit choppy to me, but I hope isn't too far off.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_01_guiney_128kb.mp3 29:06
More challenging than I had thought. The line structure of the poems made the phrasing difficult, so it seems a bit choppy to me, but I hope isn't too far off.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
thank you larry!
im sure it will be wonderful
im sure it will be wonderful
Carolin
Completed Section #2 Tarpeia
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/the_white_sail_02_guiney_128kb.mp3 04m18s
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/the_white_sail_02_guiney_128kb.mp3 04m18s
Thank you
Carolin