COMPLETE October and other Poems by Robert Bridges -ck
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Here is the section 01. October
I would appreciate feedback...
I'm concerned about mouth noises, but if something else stands out please let me know. I'll fix it before I upload the next one.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_01_bridges_128kb.mp3
Thank you!
thatkidsmom
I would appreciate feedback...
I'm concerned about mouth noises, but if something else stands out please let me know. I'll fix it before I upload the next one.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_01_bridges_128kb.mp3
Thank you!
thatkidsmom
I liked your reading! As far as feedback, your recording is a little on the loud side. It should be between 87 and 91 db, and yours hit at 91.4. I did hear one or two mouth noises, like lip smacking, but they were very quiet and did not bother me. You do have some decent plosives in there though (where you pronounce a th or f or p and you get a blowing sound on the mic). That can usually be avoided by positioning the mic a little above or a little under your mouth, so that you don't blow directly on it when you speak. An example is at 9 seconds in, when you say "play".thatkidsmom wrote:Here is the section 01. October
I would appreciate feedback...
I'm concerned about mouth noises, but if something else stands out please let me know. I'll fix it before I upload the next one.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_01_bridges_128kb.mp3
Thank you!
thatkidsmom
I leave it up to you if you want to re-record. Just reduce the volume to be within 87-91 db, and I will consider it good. Overall, I enjoyed your delivery of the poem!
Elizabeth Davis
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
here's another one:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_06_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:48 min.
I can take the next 6
7 Our Lady
8 The Curfew Tower
9 Flycatchers
10 Ghosts
11 Έτώσιον ἄχθος ἀρούρης
12 Hell and Hate
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_06_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:48 min.
I can take the next 6
7 Our Lady
8 The Curfew Tower
9 Flycatchers
10 Ghosts
11 Έτώσιον ἄχθος ἀρούρης
12 Hell and Hate
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Section 6 is PL OK!Kitty wrote:here's another one:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_06_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:48 min.
Elizabeth Davis
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
Thank you all
Carolin
Elizabeth, thank you for your quck pl feedback we generally accept files between 86 and 92. Thats what the checker is programmed to accept so we came to ok those as well.
Thatkidsmom, how long is the recording (mm.ss)? Please remember to always post the duration of a recording when you post a link so that i can fill in the magic window thank you!
Thatkidsmom, how long is the recording (mm.ss)? Please remember to always post the duration of a recording when you post a link so that i can fill in the magic window thank you!
Carolin
Thanks for letting me know! I am still learning, but I feel like I'm getting the hang of it more and more each day.Carolin wrote:Elizabeth, thank you for your quck pl feedback we generally accept files between 86 and 92. Thats what the checker is programmed to accept so we came to ok those as well.
Elizabeth Davis
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
a.k.a. "Lizard the Wizard"
Musician, vocalist, writer, reader, amateur chef, nerd, and all-around fun person.
Dont worry, youre doing great ill help you with the technicalities, but there isnt much to keep track of
Carolin
Thank you
Carolin
Hi Carolin,
I would like to claim Section 13 'Wake up, England!'
Cheers,
FraserP
I would like to claim Section 13 'Wake up, England!'
Cheers,
FraserP
Cheers,
Fraser Prescott
Fraser Prescott
thank you fraser
Carolin
here are two shorties already
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_10_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 0:39 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_11_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 0:43 min.
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_10_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 0:39 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_11_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 0:43 min.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and two more. I especially liked the word-play in the final line of Flycatchers
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_07_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:49 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_09_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:35 min.
and I think I can claim the next 5 for tomorrow
14 Lord Kitchener
15 Ode on the Tercentenary Commemoration of Shakespeare, 1916
16 The Chivalry of the Sea
17 For 'Pages Inédites,' Etc.
18 Gheluvelt
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_07_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:49 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/october_09_bridges_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:35 min.
and I think I can claim the next 5 for tomorrow
14 Lord Kitchener
15 Ode on the Tercentenary Commemoration of Shakespeare, 1916
16 The Chivalry of the Sea
17 For 'Pages Inédites,' Etc.
18 Gheluvelt
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.