[COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
I agree with him too (may he RIP), hence the addition to my sig.
Meanwhile, chapter 18 has been posted. And no, Carlton didn't change his first name to Frank.
Enjoy! And thanks!!
Meanwhile, chapter 18 has been posted. And no, Carlton didn't change his first name to Frank.
Enjoy! And thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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Haha! Good one about Carlton changing his name to Frank.
Two things:
At 9:10 the text says, "... and except for the SEVERING of old acquaintances..." You said SERVING.
At 14:16 the text says, "Schuyler Carlton STARTED as if he had been physically struck." You said STARED.
That's all I could find!
Two things:
At 9:10 the text says, "... and except for the SEVERING of old acquaintances..." You said SERVING.
At 14:16 the text says, "Schuyler Carlton STARTED as if he had been physically struck." You said STARED.
That's all I could find!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
Those are great catches! Mine eyes must be missing a letter or two on occasion.
So, chapter 18 has been patched up and re-uploaded, ready for your eagle-eared scrutiny (which is awesome, BTW). (Eagle-eared??? )
Thanks!!
So, chapter 18 has been patched up and re-uploaded, ready for your eagle-eared scrutiny (which is awesome, BTW). (Eagle-eared??? )
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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I will accept either eagle-eared or bat-eared as compliments.
Chapter 18 is PL OK!
Chapter 18 is PL OK!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Yes, it's getting interesting!
Just a couple of things in Chapter 19:
At 11:04 the text reads, "Why that woman is FRIGHTENED at everything." You said FRIGHTENING.
At 13:22 the text reads, "...and one of the facts." You added the word LAST in there.
That's all I could find!
Just a couple of things in Chapter 19:
At 11:04 the text reads, "Why that woman is FRIGHTENED at everything." You said FRIGHTENING.
At 13:22 the text reads, "...and one of the facts." You added the word LAST in there.
That's all I could find!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Patched very well!
Chapter 19 is PL OK!
Chapter 19 is PL OK!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Notes for Chapter 20:
At 3:19 the text says, "...but turn toward the new TRAIL." You said TRIAL.
At 16:09 the text says, "in West Sixty-SIXTH Street." You said NINTH.
That's all I could find!
At 3:19 the text says, "...but turn toward the new TRAIL." You said TRIAL.
At 16:09 the text says, "in West Sixty-SIXTH Street." You said NINTH.
That's all I could find!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
I guess the second error was minor, but as I've said, I like it to be as accurate as possible. So I appreciate the effort and noting both errors.
Chapter 20 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
Chapter 20 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
As we may soon find out, it seems that the famous Fleming Stone may be on the horizon to lend assistance in this seemingly insolvable case.
Chapter 21 has been posted.
Thanks!!
Chapter 21 has been posted.
Thanks!!
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Well, it's about time Fleming Stone showed up, since the book is almost over! I'm sort of rooting for Fessenden to solve it himself first though.
Chapters 20 and 21 are both PL OK!
Chapters 20 and 21 are both PL OK!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Just one teeny-tiny thing in Chapter 22:
At 14:03 the text says, "She raised her wonderful eyes and looked straight at ROB." You said BOB.
At 14:03 the text says, "She raised her wonderful eyes and looked straight at ROB." You said BOB.
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman