[COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells

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Post by Roger » October 16th, 2017, 2:58 pm

I agree with him too (may he RIP), hence the addition to my sig. :thumbs:

Meanwhile, chapter 18 has been posted. And no, Carlton didn't change his first name to Frank. :lol:

Enjoy! And thanks!! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by HollyJenson » October 16th, 2017, 9:32 pm

Haha! Good one about Carlton changing his name to Frank. :lol:

Two things:

At 9:10 the text says, "... and except for the SEVERING of old acquaintances..." You said SERVING.

At 14:16 the text says, "Schuyler Carlton STARTED as if he had been physically struck." You said STARED.

That's all I could find! :D
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 17th, 2017, 9:57 am

Those are great catches! Mine eyes must be missing a letter or two on occasion. :lol:

So, chapter 18 has been patched up and re-uploaded, ready for your eagle-eared scrutiny (which is awesome, BTW). (Eagle-eared??? 8-) )

Thanks!! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by HollyJenson » October 18th, 2017, 9:11 pm

I will accept either eagle-eared or bat-eared as compliments. :lol:

Chapter 18 is PL OK!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 21st, 2017, 9:48 am

Meant entirely as a compliment. :wink:

Chapter 19, another interesting one I think, has now been posted.

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by HollyJenson » October 22nd, 2017, 8:53 pm

Yes, it's getting interesting!

Just a couple of things in Chapter 19:

At 11:04 the text reads, "Why that woman is FRIGHTENED at everything." You said FRIGHTENING.

At 13:22 the text reads, "...and one of the facts." You added the word LAST in there.

That's all I could find!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 24th, 2017, 8:09 am

Good catches!

Chapter 19, patched and re-uploaded.

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by HollyJenson » October 25th, 2017, 9:02 pm

Patched very well! :D

Chapter 19 is PL OK! :clap:
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 26th, 2017, 11:58 am

Good timing. 8-)

Chapter 20 has been posted, ready for a listen.

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by HollyJenson » October 28th, 2017, 4:04 pm

Notes for Chapter 20:

At 3:19 the text says, "...but turn toward the new TRAIL." You said TRIAL.

At 16:09 the text says, "in West Sixty-SIXTH Street." You said NINTH.

That's all I could find!
Holly

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Post by Roger » October 29th, 2017, 5:49 pm

I guess the second error was minor, but as I've said, I like it to be as accurate as possible. So I appreciate the effort and noting both errors.

Chapter 20 has been patched and re-uploaded.

Thanks! :D
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"

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Post by Roger » October 30th, 2017, 10:03 am

As we may soon find out, it seems that the famous Fleming Stone may be on the horizon to lend assistance in this seemingly insolvable case.

Chapter 21 has been posted.

Thanks!! :D
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Post by HollyJenson » October 30th, 2017, 6:03 pm

Well, it's about time Fleming Stone showed up, since the book is almost over! :D I'm sort of rooting for Fessenden to solve it himself first though.

Chapters 20 and 21 are both PL OK! :clap:
Holly

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Post by Roger » November 2nd, 2017, 2:12 pm

No sign of that master detective, Fleming Stone yet!
But I think it's time we hear what Miss Morton has to say. :hmm:

Chapter 22 has been posted.

Thanks! :D
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Post by HollyJenson » November 3rd, 2017, 8:27 am

Just one teeny-tiny thing in Chapter 22:

At 14:03 the text says, "She raised her wonderful eyes and looked straight at ROB." You said BOB.
Holly

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