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Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » October 11th, 2017, 5:21 am

Chapter 10 is up. Hopefully I get the ball back rolling!!!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » October 12th, 2017, 4:38 am

Chapter 10 is PLOK. Fanny is reformed!

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » November 2nd, 2017, 7:07 am

Chapter 11 is up.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » November 2nd, 2017, 9:53 am

Up and PL OK .Good for you and for Fanny .

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » November 27th, 2017, 9:18 am

Chapter 12 is PL OK .

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » December 19th, 2017, 4:33 am

Chapter 13!! Poor Fanny!! It's interesting to note how far we've come in our views of other people. Political correctness is truly out the window in this chapter of savage injuns!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » December 19th, 2017, 6:34 am

Sure is, but it is a part of our history, no? Excellent reading!

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » January 3rd, 2018, 12:14 pm

Chapter 14 is up.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 4th, 2018, 5:31 am

Chapter 14 is PL OK! Good job. Happy New Year, Scarlett. Jim

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » January 5th, 2018, 9:38 am

Chapter 15 is up

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 5th, 2018, 2:23 pm

And it is PL OK. Ethan is pretty courageous for a kid, no?

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 16th, 2018, 6:06 am

There is just one place that needs editing: at 26-33, you repeat the phrase "ready for use," and there is a pause between the two. Hope all is well. Jim

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » January 16th, 2018, 10:43 am

Thanks! That was a correction I missed. Hopefully I get the next section up today.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 16th, 2018, 5:31 pm

Section 16 is PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 16th, 2018, 6:23 pm

Sections 17 and 18 are also PL OK! Good job.