COMPLETE Gypsy, the talking dog, by Tudor Jenks -ck

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » August 25th, 2017, 1:05 am

thank you

GillH · Post by **GillH** » August 26th, 2017, 9:08 am

Chapter 10
Length 9:21

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_10_jenks_128kb.mp3

GillH · Post by **GillH** » August 26th, 2017, 9:09 am

Can I continue with 11 and 12?

JorWat · Post by **JorWat** » August 27th, 2017, 2:35 am

And I'm back!

Gill, Chapter 7 is PL OK, but I have some notes for Chapter 10:

1:14: 'silly' should be 'silk'
2:54: 'avas' should be 'was'
3:35: 'shaped' should be 'stopped'
7:10: 'steel' should be 'steep'

Linda, Chapter 5 is PL OK.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » August 27th, 2017, 5:18 am

Thank you both

Fadster · Post by **Fadster** » August 27th, 2017, 6:07 am

Hi! Here's chapter 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3

Length - 11:24

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » August 27th, 2017, 7:16 am

Thank you!

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » August 27th, 2017, 9:26 am

Thank you for the PL OK! I'd like to take Chapter 6, if it's still open!

JorWat · Post by **JorWat** » August 27th, 2017, 1:02 pm

Fadster wrote:Hi! Here's chapter 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3

Length - 11:24

Hi Fadi,

Here are your notes:

The volume is too low. You should be aiming for 89 dB and you're at 81.8. I'd amplify it as much as you can without clipping (which seems to be 6.891).
The ending silence is too long. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got about 6.1 seconds.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » August 28th, 2017, 12:53 am

thank you both

GillH · Post by **GillH** » August 28th, 2017, 1:16 am

Edited Section 10
Length 9:34

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_10_jenks_128kb.mp3

JorWat · Post by **JorWat** » August 28th, 2017, 2:36 am

GillH wrote:Edited Section 10
Length 9:34

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_10_jenks_128kb.mp3

Hi Gill,

The changes have been made, but you accidentally left in some of your outtakes at 1:21-1:31.

GillH · Post by **GillH** » August 28th, 2017, 3:01 am

Oops!
Re-edited. 9:24
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_10_jenks_128kb.mp3

Fadster · Post by **Fadster** » August 28th, 2017, 4:56 am

Thanks Jordan! I've made the changes.

Here is the edited version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3
Length 11:22

GillH · Post by **GillH** » August 28th, 2017, 5:42 am

Chapter 11 8:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_11_jenks_128kb.mp3

Chapter 12 9:07
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_12_jenks_128kb.mp3