COMPLETE Gypsy, the talking dog, by Tudor Jenks -ck
thank you
Carolin
Can I continue with 11 and 12?
And I'm back!
Gill, Chapter 7 is PL OK, but I have some notes for Chapter 10:
1:14: 'silly' should be 'silk'
2:54: 'avas' should be 'was'
3:35: 'shaped' should be 'stopped'
7:10: 'steel' should be 'steep'
Linda, Chapter 5 is PL OK.
Gill, Chapter 7 is PL OK, but I have some notes for Chapter 10:
1:14: 'silly' should be 'silk'
2:54: 'avas' should be 'was'
3:35: 'shaped' should be 'stopped'
7:10: 'steel' should be 'steep'
Linda, Chapter 5 is PL OK.
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
Thank you both
Carolin
Thank you!
Carolin
Hi Fadi,Fadster wrote:Hi! Here's chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3
Length - 11:24
Here are your notes:
The volume is too low. You should be aiming for 89 dB and you're at 81.8. I'd amplify it as much as you can without clipping (which seems to be 6.891).
The ending silence is too long. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got about 6.1 seconds.
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
thank you both
Carolin
Hi Gill,GillH wrote:Edited Section 10
Length 9:34
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_10_jenks_128kb.mp3
The changes have been made, but you accidentally left in some of your outtakes at 1:21-1:31.
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
Thanks Jordan! I've made the changes.
Here is the edited version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3
Length 11:22
Here is the edited version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/gypsy_08_jenks_128kb.mp3
Length 11:22