All of Leanne's files are PL OK. Loved the effect she used for the children and honeysuckles, to make them sound like a chorus of voices.
Jason, everything but 137 and 156 is PL OK. Glad you read the linnets multiple times, in different voices, so we can combine them into a chorus similar to Leanne's.
Your PL notes:
- For 137, I heard a mispronunciation of "mainsail." You say "main-sull" when it can be either "main-sail" or "main-sle." "Main-sull" is a bit too wide of the mark.
- For 156, ~1:45 you slightly stumble over the line "And a murmur of happiness" so that it sounds a little like "a mermeer of happiness." At ~2:15, you say "comforts" instead of "confronts," which is a noticeable change in meaning. And at ~2:50 you say "Right now" instead of "Where now."
Altogether, everything was wonderfully read, both of you! 15 and 144 are ready to edit... if Sonia doesn't get to them, I can quickly do them later.
It's also a rainy day here, so I had nothing else to do at the moment. Maybe I will edit the two DRs, too.
good thing I listened to them before I did my narration. I'm using a straight voice, so yours will have pride of place, but I'm imitating the same excited tone in my recording. I think it is a great mix together !