ToddHW wrote:Lovewell uploaded for PL.



My favourite scene is the dialogue with Lyric in Act 4 ! This will sound great in the end

No errors found in all 4 acts. PL ok. Well done !
Sonia
ToddHW wrote:Lovewell uploaded for PL.
glad you're feeling better Jessie ! And I can assure you, you are quite excellent at talking dirtyjpercival wrote:All right, after a terrible month ish bout of allergies that kept me completely stuffed up, here are the last two Pindress parts... I felt rather... dirty... reading act 4, but I got over it. Such fun!
I also sometimes suspect a conspiracy against my recordingLet me know if any of my volume or lines need to be fixed. I'm having a heck of a time getting consistent set up as well as avoiding cars that seem to love to drive down my street ONLY when I'm recording.
I can't wait to hear the finished product! It was a lot of fun figuring out how to say certain things. The higher volume is likely from when I forgot I wasn't actually on stage and started performing and projecting my lines rather than saying them in a way that wouldn't blow out my mic.thanks for participating here, our dialogue together will sound great once assembled
haha, bravo, excellently tongue-in-cheek performance here. It's SOOO obvious what this woman wants from Roebuckcatharmaiden wrote:Second Mask:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/loveandabottle_mask2_4.mp3 (1:19)
Sandra
excellent, another major character finished. All of Roebuck is PL ok. Thanks so much Algy ! Although, hearing how this guy behaves, I cannot really understand what Leanthe sees in himAlgy Pug wrote:Here are the remaining acts for Roebuck:
Thanks.
very lyrically acted out Jasonjasonb wrote:Here is my Lyric act 3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/loveandabottle_lyric_3.mp3
Kitty wrote: very lyrically acted out JasonHe's got a bit of a mean streak though
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Well done on the whole, but I found two textual errors, which I think would be better corrected for a more coherent meaning:
> at 3:06: (p. 61 top): "Is that because I take physic when I write" - you say psychic, which is a bit weird![]()
> at 5:33: (p. 62 bottom): "They must be knaves or fools, by their fulsome compliment." - you say "complaint" which in this case is not accurate
The rest: totally ok
Sonia