COMPL [poetry] London Lyrics by Frederick Locker-Lampson -ck

histrion · Post by **histrion** » October 30th, 2017, 10:57 am

Time on #6 (https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_06_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3)
is 3:28.

Apologies for the miss.

tovarisch · Post by **tovarisch** » October 30th, 2017, 7:40 pm

Here is 9, ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_09_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3 4:30

Thank you.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 31st, 2017, 12:49 am

Thank you all

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » October 31st, 2017, 7:22 am

Steve:

Section 6 is PL-OK!

Nicely done! Congratulations on completing your first reading (and welcome to Librivox).

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » October 31st, 2017, 7:23 am

Tovarish:

Section 9 is PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip

tovarisch · Post by **tovarisch** » October 31st, 2017, 8:06 am

Thanks, Philip!

histrion · Post by **histrion** » October 31st, 2017, 10:13 am

Thanks much, Philip!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » November 3rd, 2017, 1:54 pm

Thank you philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » November 3rd, 2017, 2:03 pm

Everyone is very welcome!

Philip

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » November 8th, 2017, 6:54 am

I would like to claim section 1 the Introduction.

aniroo

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » November 8th, 2017, 11:14 am

Thank you

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » November 10th, 2017, 9:59 am

Section 1 Time: 19:55

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_01_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3

aniroo

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » November 10th, 2017, 11:05 pm

Thank you

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » November 11th, 2017, 7:59 am

Aniroo--

Just a few small corrections needed in Section 1. Otherwise, well read!

at 1:20 and 2:18 I heard "Locke": I expected "Locker"
at 2:13 I heard "1839" : I expected "1893"
at 6:16 I heard "Average O Lord" : I expected "Avenge O Lord"
at 6:54 I heard "It should not": I expected "It should"
at 7:30 I heard "But his name"" I expected "But his theme."
at 12:03 the line "This might be contradicted is chopped (the -ed is missing)
at 15:26 I heard "Paronomasia the 'pon words": I expected "Paronomasia play 'pon words"

I enjoyed your reading.

Many thanks,

Philip

tovarisch · Post by **tovarisch** » November 11th, 2017, 8:31 am

If nobody has claimed it yet, I'd like to read 5.