COMPL [poetry] London Lyrics by Frederick Locker-Lampson -ck

[pschempf]

Carolin-

May I have sections 16 and 19?

[tovarisch]

Here is 5, ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_05_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3 3:56

Thanks!

[tovarisch]

I'll do 10 to bridge that gap... (unless somebody took it already)

[tovarisch]

I hope I'm not stepping on somebody toes here...

Here is 10, ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_10_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3 2:16

Thank you!

[Carolin]

Thank you all

[DrPGould]

Tovarisch:

Section 10 is PL-OK! Nicely done.

Just a couple of small items with respect to Section 5:

at 0:39 I heard "senses": I expected "scenes"
at 3:00 I heard "daring": I expected "darling"

Many thanks,

Philip

[pschempf]

Carolin-

Sections 16 and 19 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_16_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3
Track length: 2:14

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_19_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3
Track length: 1:04

[tovarisch]

Tovarisch:

Section 10 is PL-OK! Nicely done.

Just a couple of small items with respect to Section 5:

at 0:39 I heard "senses": I expected "scenes"
at 3:00 I heard "daring": I expected "darling"

Many thanks,

Philip

Thanks, Philip. I've edited Section 5. Same link, shorter by 1 second. Please check.

[DrPGould]

Tovarish

Section 5 is now PL-OK! (Otlichno!)

Many thanks,

Philip

[Carolin]

Thank you all!

[aniroo]

Aniroo--

Just a few small corrections needed in Section 1. Otherwise, well read!

at 1:20 and 2:18 I heard "Locke": I expected "Locker"
at 2:13 I heard "1839" : I expected "1893"
at 6:16 I heard "Average O Lord" : I expected "Avenge O Lord"
at 6:54 I heard "It should not": I expected "It should"
at 7:30 I heard "But his name"" I expected "But his theme."
at 12:03 the line "This might be contradicted is chopped (the -ed is missing)
at 15:26 I heard "Paronomasia the 'pon words": I expected "Paronomasia play 'pon words"

I enjoyed your reading.

Many thanks,



Here is the edited file. Much thanks.
aniroo

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_01_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3 19:56

Philip

[DrPGould]

Aniroo:

We're almost there.....

The correction of 1839 to 1893 at 2:13 seems to have been overlooked. (Sorry)

The others were all seamlessly done! Good job.

Many thanks,

Philip

[aniroo]

Aniroo:

We're almost there.....

The correction of 1839 to 1893 at 2:13 seems to have been overlooked. (Sorry)

The others were all seamlessly done! Good job.

Many thanks,

Philip

Take 3!
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_01_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3 19:56

[DrPGould]

Bravo Aniroo! Section 1 is PL-OK!

Many thanks

Philip

[emmacharliebrowning]

Section 21


https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/londonlyrics_21_lockerlampson_128kb.mp3

1:20