[Complete] A Woman's War by Warwick Deeping - lt

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 5th, 2017, 8:54 am

Lynne,

Chapter 22 is PL OK.

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 5th, 2017, 9:07 am

pnagami wrote:Lynne,

Chapter 22 is PL OK.

Pam

I had to look up bromide, as I wondered why he gave it to her

I also had to look up something in ch 24 (I won't give it away

) but I'm none the wiser

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 5th, 2017, 9:11 am

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 23: at 05:24 I hear "doctor" instead of "grocer"

My best,

Pam

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 5th, 2017, 9:23 am

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 24 is PL OK.

I figured this diagnosis out, just as they did, when meningeal signs supervened on a subacute febrile wasting illness with lymphadenopathy. The basilar meningitis causes foraminal proteinaceous blockage at the base of the brain and obstructive hydrocephalus is creating the headache and the dysconjugate gaze.
I can translate this into English and send it to you as a PM, if you wish.

I love your voice acting.

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 5th, 2017, 9:52 am

pnagami wrote:Hi Lynne,

Chapter 24 is PL OK.

I figured this diagnosis out, just as they did, when meningeal signs supervened on a subacute febrile wasting illness with lymphadenopathy. The basilar meningitis causes foraminal proteinaceous blockage at the base of the brain and obstructive hydrocephalus is creating the headache and the dysconjugate gaze.
I can translate this into English and send it to you as a PM, if you wish.

I love your voice acting.

Pam

I think I can manage without... I know things don't look good for poor Gwen; and it looks like she'd need modern treatment over a period of a year to recover.
And thanks for the compliment... I try to make it obvious when someone different is speaking but I must admit, I'm enjoying Gwen's voice!

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 6th, 2017, 7:58 pm

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 18 is PL OK.

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 9th, 2017, 5:56 am

Chapter 25 is ready for PL.

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 9th, 2017, 7:57 am

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 25: at 8:04, I hear a stumble at "abnegation".

Trouble with Treponema pallidum for Dr. Parker Steele!

My best,

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 9th, 2017, 8:20 am

pnagami wrote:Hi Lynne,

Chapter 25: at 8:04, I hear a stumble at "abnegation".

Trouble with Treponema pallidum for Dr. Parker Steele!

My best,

Pam

A sad (but not unexpected) chapter 26 is ready for PL.

Thanks for the diagnosis (I looked it up... syphilis, right?). I hope he's given it to Mrs. Betty

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 9th, 2017, 8:25 am

Right.

Pam

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 9th, 2017, 10:25 am

This made me cry.
Chapter 26 is PL OK.

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 9th, 2017, 1:35 pm

Chapter 27 is ready. It won't bring Gwen back, but maybe they are in for some better luck?

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 9th, 2017, 3:28 pm

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 27 is PL OK.

Great,

Pam

pnagami · Post by **pnagami** » August 9th, 2017, 3:44 pm

Hi Lynne,

Chapter 23 is PL OK.

Pam

Post by **Lynnet** » August 10th, 2017, 4:51 pm

28-30 ready for PL.