Recording time: 18:28 min.
Could you please Spot PL the parts I edited ?
Here are the original PL notes from p. 44:
these are the new time-stamps which need to be Spot checked after I cut out the following repeated words:Kitty wrote:PL notes:
> at 0:24: “Story 136” can be cut out here, the title of the story is enough (as per standardized intro blurb in the first post)
> at 0:52: loud click can be cut out
> at 2:25: stumble and repeat: “whose body was brown like rusty iron”
> at 11:15: stumble and repeat: ”but he held it fast with both hands”
> at 12:46: stumble and repeat: “and behind them followed a great troop of soldiers”
> nearly 11 seconds of silence at the end, please cut down to our standard 5 seconds
> at 0:24: Story 136
> at 0:50: loud click
> at 2:24: body
> at 11:13: held
> at 12:45: soldiers
> at 18:24: 5 seconds silence at the end