almost one hour !!!!! I think this the longest story in our collection now. You were brave to tackle it Sara
And you did well. I found no significant errors at all and you are ready quite fluently and gripping at the right places. I especially liked the small things like the witch laughing evilly.
Makes the story lively. Also the animal voices you made different enough, which is a nice touch.
The only thing I noticed is the end silence, which was over 12 seconds, but 5 are enough. We used to have this rule that stories over 30 minutes need 10 seconds, but this was abolished a few months ago. And 12 is really a bit long. But since there were no other corrections to make, I quickly deleted a few seconds myself and re-uploaded your file
So nothing needed on your part anymore.
Recording time: 55:38 min.
Story 60 is PL ok
. Congrats for such a huge feat