I remember this story as well !!! It is a bit similar to another one I heard too, "Six come through the whole world". Well read, EvaEvaK wrote:Here come The six servants, a story I especially loved as a child.
I found only two small errors, that change the meaning a bit. Maybe if you could redo those sentences ?I have two or three inaccuracies as far as the wording goes, nothing to worry about, in my opinion. Hope you agree.
> at 0:27: in the intro, you need not repeat "Story 134" right before the title. Oops, maybe I overlooked that mistake in Hans in Luck, I cannot remember whether you did it there too, sorry
> at 3:44: "They went onwards, and then saw a pair of feet lying and part of a pair of legs, but could not see the rest of the body." - you say "lying on a pair of legs" which doesn't make sense in this context
> at 17:03: "I have deserved this for my haughtiness and pride" - it is haughtiness, not naughtiness but arguably she was naughty too, but I think she meant her pride here in this context
The rest was perfect, thanks