[COMPLETE] Cleopatra - dlo

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 29th, 2017, 8:09 am

Thirteen is in. A battle lost because of a little make-up?

Post by **craigdav1** » July 29th, 2017, 3:40 pm

13 PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 29th, 2017, 3:42 pm

Thanks.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 13th, 2017, 5:55 pm

I have entered Section 14 (Ch 12). Sorry, I did the whole thing.

Post by **craigdav1** » August 13th, 2017, 8:08 pm

14 PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 14th, 2017, 4:10 am

Thanks, Dave.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 21st, 2017, 6:54 pm

Fifteen is in. Not very good, but is it adequate?

Post by **craigdav1** » August 21st, 2017, 8:03 pm

15 PL OK.

You say in the outro "end of chapter 13." Is section 16, part 2 of ch. 13?

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 22nd, 2017, 4:02 am

Yes, so I need to say "end of Chapter 13, part 1." OK. I will have to do the same in the intro. Thanks.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 26th, 2017, 10:09 am

OK
I fixed 15 and submitted 16 and 17.

Thanks, Jim

Post by **craigdav1** » August 26th, 2017, 3:13 pm

15-17 PL OK.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 26th, 2017, 6:48 pm

Thanks, Dave

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 3rd, 2017, 12:30 pm

No rest for the weary. No rush, please:

Post by **craigdav1** » September 3rd, 2017, 8:19 pm

18
31:29-31:31 delete repeat, "which often"

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 4th, 2017, 5:37 am

Thanks, Dave. I will fix that this evening.