Complete Concerning Isabel Carnaby by E. Thorneycro-ke

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Post by Lmnei » September 14th, 2017, 7:29 am

Miss Stav/Arlene -

Here are two more Chapters for you -

Section 21 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_21_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 35:40
Section 22 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_22_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 29:59

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Post by Lmnei » September 14th, 2017, 5:25 pm

ArleneJoyce wrote:Thanks, Linda! As we discussed in our PM conversation, there are two things you'd like to fix in Chapter 19:

At 7:59, "my dear" is repeated in the recording, but not in the written text
At 21:10, you read "Peter" and then corrected it to "Paul"
Hi Arlene - thanks for the feedback - these are both fixed now in Chapter 19 - here it is for you to check!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_19_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 28:18

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Post by MaryAnnSpiegel » September 14th, 2017, 6:59 pm

Sorry for the delay, here is 0 - 12.26 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_00_fowler_128kb.mp3

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Post by miss stav » September 14th, 2017, 7:09 pm

How wonderful to see you all made such a great progress. I returned from a vacation and that was so great. I am here for real now. Thank you all.
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Post by miss stav » September 14th, 2017, 7:14 pm

Linda, as Monika did not claim 11 and 12, they are all yours.
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 15th, 2017, 9:16 pm

You guys have been busy!

The prologue, Chapter 19, and Chapter 14 are all PL OK. I hope to get all the others caught up by Sunday, as I will be away on business for most of a week.
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Post by Lmnei » September 16th, 2017, 12:42 pm

miss stav wrote:Linda, as Monika did not claim 11 and 12, they are all yours.
Thanks Miss Stav! I will get to them in a bit... Working on Celistina right now.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 17th, 2017, 7:50 pm

Hi, Linda.

Chapter 21 has 3 stumble/repeats that you probably meant to edit out:
- at 23:32 "and her eyes remained me", followed by "and her eyes reminded me"
- at 24:58 "who had no bewitching little valties" followed by "who had no bewitching little vanities"
- at 31:17 "and won't" followed by "and went"

and at 28:07, there are a couple words that are out of place and don't make sense in context (maybe from a previous or next line)? "said sometimes" instead of "comedies"
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 17th, 2017, 8:25 pm

A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 17th, 2017, 8:26 pm

Chapter 1 is PL OK.
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Post by Lmnei » September 17th, 2017, 8:29 pm

Hi Arlene -

Many thanks for the feedback - here is Section 21 back with the edits -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_21_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 35:31

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Post by Lmnei » September 17th, 2017, 8:31 pm

ArleneJoyce wrote:A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.
Arlene - do you mean Chapter 22?

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Post by Lmnei » September 17th, 2017, 8:40 pm

Lmnei wrote:
ArleneJoyce wrote:A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.
Arlene - do you mean Chapter 22?
It is okay Arlene - I found the edit at 15:8 - it was a little farther along which made me question whether it was Chapter 22 or not.

I have completed the edits on Chapter 22 now - thanks for the feedback!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_22_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 29:51

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 18th, 2017, 5:35 am

Yes, I apologize. It was chapter 22 and I was missing a digit in the time. Apparently, my mind was already on packing.
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