Complete Concerning Isabel Carnaby by E. Thorneycro-ke

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Post by Lmnei » September 21st, 2017, 6:32 am

Hi Miss Stav -

Here are 2 more sections for you.

Section 23 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_23_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 26:18
Section 24 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_24_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 28:34

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Post by miss stav » September 21st, 2017, 8:10 am

Huge huge thanks.
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by miss stav » September 21st, 2017, 7:03 pm

Huge huge thanks.
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 23rd, 2017, 7:19 pm

Chapter 15 sounds great and I've marked it PL OK. Chapter 16 has a stumble/repeat at 11:27 -- "then why should you bring this charge...."
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 23rd, 2017, 7:25 pm

The edits on chapters 21 and 22 are wonderful. I can't tell that there is an edit there at all. I've marked them PL OK.
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Post by miss stav » September 23rd, 2017, 8:07 pm

Thank you, Jim and Arleen.
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 23rd, 2017, 8:26 pm

Chapter 23 has a couple of opportunities for edits -- both stumble/repeats:

1:52 "and there was all"
22:23 "so you felt there was...so you felt there were two Pauls"
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Post by miss stav » September 23rd, 2017, 8:30 pm

Hi Arleen,
I saw that you put under chapter 16 in the mw "see pl notes", but I did not see the notes.
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 23rd, 2017, 8:39 pm

The notes for Chapter 16 are: Chapter 16 has a stumble/repeat at 11:27 -- "then why should you bring this charge...."
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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 23rd, 2017, 9:00 pm

Just one stumble/repeat in Chapter 24, "Mr. Kesterton's eyes twinkled" at 8:42.
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Post by Lmnei » September 23rd, 2017, 10:29 pm

Hi Arlene & Miss Stav

Here are 23 and 24 updated with corrections -

Section 23 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_23_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 26:13
Section 24 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_24_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 28:30

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 24th, 2017, 5:45 am

Here is the corrected 16. Thanks


https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_16_fowler_128kb.mp3 23.15 KB

24:41

Jim

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 24th, 2017, 1:11 pm

The fixes for chapters 16, 23, and 24 all sound good now. I've marked the chapters PL OK.
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