[COMPLETEGroup, Teen Adventure] The Child of the Moat, Holborn - ke
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Thanks, Cari! Looking forward to hearing it.
OK, Chapter 22 is ready for PL
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Great! I'll have a listen tomorrow.
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Well done on chapter 22, Cari. Just a couple of notes:
- At about 3:57, the text is, "The man lifted his grey deep set eyes..." and I'm sure that this is what you read, but listening, without the text in front of me, it sounded like, "The man looked at his grey deep set eyes..." which was confusing to me. Might it be possible to re-record this part to make sure it is clear? I hope this doesn't verge on the realm of unsolicited feedback, but I only mention it because it was unclear to me who was doing what.
- At 8:07-8:32, there are multiple repeats of "No, again, nothing must be left to chance." (If I get a vote, I prefer the first one. )
No problem! I love feedback!mightyfelix wrote:Well done on chapter 22, Cari. Just a couple of notes:
- At about 3:57, the text is, "The man lifted his grey deep set eyes..." and I'm sure that this is what you read, but listening, without the text in front of me, it sounded like, "The man looked at his grey deep set eyes..." which was confusing to me. Might it be possible to re-record this part to make sure it is clear? I hope this doesn't verge on the realm of unsolicited feedback, but I only mention it because it was unclear to me who was doing what.
- At 8:07-8:32, there are multiple repeats of "No, again, nothing must be left to chance." (If I get a vote, I prefer the first one. )
I will amend that and take out the repeats. I've been having issues with Audacity saving my edits (so frustrating), so I think I need to do a final listen through of the mp3 prior to submitting.
I should have those done by tomorrow
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No need! That's what PL'ers are for! Save that time and use it for something else... Like more recording!CariJS wrote:I've been having issues with Audacity saving my edits (so frustrating), so I think I need to do a final listen through of the mp3 prior to submitting.
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chapter 20 completed
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OK, edits on Chapter 22 complete
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Thank you! A couple of small notes:larryhayes7 wrote:chapter 20 completed
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- At 0:29, you said, "Chapter 20. The Persecution." The chapter title is just "Persecution", without "The". I don't actually know if this is the kind of thing that really matters, but because it's kind of included in the intro/disclaimer, I thought I'd mention it.
- At the end, you said, "End of Chapter." It should be "End of Chapter 20."
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PL ok! Also, I just now realized that I gave you much too wide a time signature for that second edit. Sorry about that, but clearly you found it anyway! Great job!CariJS wrote:OK, edits on Chapter 22 complete
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No worries at all! There were other very minor edits missing in that section, so the range was helpfulmightyfelix wrote: PL ok! Also, I just now realized that I gave you much too wide a time signature for that second edit. Sorry about that, but clearly you found it anyway! Great job!
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Chapter 20 corrected versionmightyfelix wrote:Thank you! A couple of small notes:larryhayes7 wrote:chapter 20 completed
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time 11:20That's it!
- At 0:29, you said, "Chapter 20. The Persecution." The chapter title is just "Persecution", without "The". I don't actually know if this is the kind of thing that really matters, but because it's kind of included in the intro/disclaimer, I thought I'd mention it.
- At the end, you said, "End of Chapter." It should be "End of Chapter 20."
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/childofthemoat_20_holborn_128kb.mp3
Time 11:20
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Intro is perfect, but now the ending has both "End of chapter" and "End of chapter 20". Please remove "End of Chapter."larryhayes7 wrote: Chapter 20 corrected version
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OHGosh! I am so sorry, going to fix nowmightyfelix wrote:Intro is perfect, but now the ending has both "End of chapter" and "End of chapter 20". Please remove "End of Chapter."larryhayes7 wrote: Chapter 20 corrected version
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mightyfelix wrote:Intro is perfect, but now the ending has both "End of chapter" and "End of chapter 20". Please remove "End of Chapter."larryhayes7 wrote: Chapter 20 corrected version
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Thanks!
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