COMPLETE (SOLO/RUSSIAN) Vsevolod Garshin, Short Stories - dii

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » December 17th, 2017, 5:55 pm

Xenium5 wrote:Mark, PL OK for 9. 13. 14. 15.

Thank you, Xenia! Sec. 15 is marked "Ready for PL" -- what is correct?

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » December 25th, 2017, 7:02 pm

Sec. 18,19 posted:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shorts ... _128kb.mp3 [28:06]
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shorts ... _128kb.mp3 [23:02]
Ufff... This was the toughest one...

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 1st, 2018, 9:32 am

Thank you, Xenia! Sec. 15 is marked "Ready for PL" -- what is correct?

15 is OK - it was a misfunction of the MW, I've changed to PL OK now from the third time!

Section 6 - PL OK

Section 3 - there is huge noise on the background, используйте функцию шумоподавления, пожалуйста.

Section 16 - some stresses should be corrected:
6:26 смотрЯщих вместо смОтрящих
6:34 увезенА вместо увЕзена
9:05 увезенА вместо увЕзена
23:15 - switch to very loud voice in "На этот раз Дедов был прав: Рябинин действительно не преуспел. Но об этом - когда-нибудь после." Надо сделать тише - будет по ушами бить слушателю.
last 5 seconds - тоже нужно шумоподавление.

Section 20 - 2:14 увезенА вместо увЕзена

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 3rd, 2018, 4:20 am

Section 21:
7:30 - афЕру вместо афЁру (http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?word=%D0 ... 0%B0&all=x)
20:28 - прИстава вместо пристАва (http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?lop=x&bt ... 0%B0%D0%B2)

Section 18 - PL OK

Section 19:
20:52 - старания вместо страдания

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 4th, 2018, 7:31 am

Posted:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shorts ... _128kb.mp3 [18:32] -- noise reduced
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shorts ... _128kb.mp3 [14:53] -- the last section!

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 5th, 2018, 4:02 am

Section 3 - perfect, PL OK.

PS: we have fantastic new view of the Forum! Congratulations to all LV team

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 5th, 2018, 4:23 am

Section 12:
fistly, the link in the MW does not belong to section 12, but to section 3

0:50 - надо "его Окна" вместо "его окнА"
3:20 - надо "милостивые" вместо "милые"

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 5th, 2018, 6:29 am

Thank you, Xenia! I like the new forum look too!

Diana, it's time to start thinking of the production.
1. I'd like to make the CD cover myself -- how do I make the claim?
2. I looked at other Russian LV books, none of them uses pre-reform Cyrillic. It occurred to me, the search won't work right, and we are not using spelling consistently anyway. I'd like to rename the story titles in the MW, if you don't mind. Where can I change the book title?

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 5th, 2018, 7:41 pm

Thank you, Xenia, for the diligent PL!
Merry Christmas!

Uploaded: sec. 12,16,19,20,21 -- ready for spot PL

dii · Post by **dii** » January 7th, 2018, 2:31 pm

Hey!

Well done!

For the CD cover, please go to the CD cover thread here: viewtopic.php?f=22&t=28785

I can rename the book title for you in the database, let me know what you would like to add! As for the section titles, you can change them as you see fit

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 11th, 2018, 1:34 pm

dii wrote: ↑January 7th, 2018, 2:31 pmI can rename the book title for you in the database, let me know what you would like to add! As for the section titles, you can change them as you see fit

Thank you, Diana!
I have renamed the section titles in the MW. The book title is good as is in English, "Всеволод Гаршин, Рассказы для детей и взрослых" in Russian, please. The intro is good to go too.
Xenia, Feb.14 is Garshin's birthday. Do you think we could finish the book by then? It's a pity, it's too gloomy for the Valentine's Day

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 13th, 2018, 11:08 am

Xenia, Feb.14 is Garshin's birthday. Do you think we could finish the book by then? It's a pity, it's too gloomy for the Valentine's Day

Dear Mark, let's do it!

Section 12 - you skipped 3:20 - "милостивые государыни...", а не "милые"
Section 16 - also skipped 9:05 - исправить "увезенА" вместо "увЕзена"
Section 19 - PL OK
Section 20 - PL OK
Section 21 - PL OK

So, it is almost done. Good job!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 15th, 2018, 7:07 pm

Xenium5 wrote: ↑January 13th, 2018, 11:08 am Section 12 - you skipped 3:20 - "милостивые государыни...", а не "милые"
Section 16 - also skipped 9:05 - исправить "увезенА" вместо "увЕзена"

Ох, извините старика, рассеянность. Вот, вроде, починил.
Uploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_12_garshin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_16_garshin_128kb.mp3

Xenium5 · Post by **Xenium5** » January 20th, 2018, 3:49 am

Great: 12 and 16 PL OK/
Congratulation for really facinating reading!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 20th, 2018, 8:18 am

Thank you, Xenia, for your help, it was really important! Congratulations on your completion of EO!
Diana, I think it's ready for production, did I miss anything?