COMPLETE (SOLO/RUSSIAN) Vsevolod Garshin, Short Stories - dii

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karlkuzmich wrote:
Did you save my feedback to your EO project? Let me know if not, and I'll re-PL.
Я не сохранила их (написала в том топике) :(
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Sec.22 and 1 are uploaded, ready for (spot) PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_01_garshin_128kb.mp3 [21:04]
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_22_garshin_128kb.mp3 [45:45] -- Thank you, Xenia, for the feedback, intro and outro updated, pauses, sighs, lip smacking are cleaned. I'm not sure you want to listen again to everything here, just start and finish would be nice, thanks again!
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Oh, great! Will check both next week - I am out of the computer for a while.
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секция 22 - PL ok
По первой и второй технических проблем нет, но есть неверные по-русски ударения, я бы переделала:
секция 1 - 03:16 - красИвее (http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?zar=x&word=%D0%BA%D1%80%D0%B0%D1%81%D0%B8%D0%B2%D0%B5%D0%B5)
секция 2 - 01:44 - кУхонного крыльца (http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?lop=x&zar=x&word=%D0%BA%D1%83%D1%85%D0%BE%D0%BD%D0%BD%D1%8B%D0%B9)
07:25 - БогоявлЕнск, БогоявлЕнске (https://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%91%D0%BE%D0%B3%D0%BE%D1%8F%D0%B2%D0%BB%D0%B5%D0%BD%D1%81%D0%BA_(%D1%81%D1%82%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%86%D0%B8%D1%8F))

В целом - по-прежнему великолепное чтение по ролям! :clap:
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Огромное спасибо, Ксения, Ваша помощь с ударениями неоценима! Я уже почти 30 лет в России не был, теперь по-другому говорят!
Sec.1,2 re-uploaded, ready for spot-PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_01_garshin_128kb.mp3 [21:04]
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_02_garshin_128kb.mp3 [13:03]
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Happy New Year, everyone!

Posted sec. 17, 7
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_07_garshin_128kb.mp3 [25:51]
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_17_garshin_128kb.mp3 [36:01]

Diana, I don't mind using the old spelling in the catalogue, but I'd like to ask you to keep the metadata as I enter them, in modern Cyrillic. Too many players garble metadata, sometimes messing up the playing order, so I'd like to keep them less confusing.
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karlkuzmich wrote:Огромное спасибо, Ксения, Ваша помощь с ударениями неоценима! Я уже почти 30 лет в России не был, теперь по-другому говорят!
Sec.1,2 re-uploaded, ready for spot-PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_01_garshin_128kb.mp3 [21:04]
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_02_garshin_128kb.mp3 [13:03]

PL OK
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PL 7-8.
Марк, у Вас периодически гуляет звук: вдруг глухо становится (например в секции 7 на 3:30 или в 8-й на 7:00, 7:15, 21:40). У меня такое бывает, если во время чтения голову наклонять (когда низ страницы читаешь). Это не критично и переписывать не обязательно, но лучше избегать :)
В 7 секции еще причмокивание на 18:20 где-то. Тоже не критично - можно не исправлять.
В 8-й тоже причмокивание на 18:56. Но что точно тут надо исправить так это треск на 24:20 (или он тут нарочно - как звук пуль?) и ударение на 9:02 - прИставе http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?word=%D0%BF%D1%80%D0%B8%D1%81%D1%82%D0%B0%D0%B2&all=x
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PL 17, пара ударений:
28:07 - приведенЫ http://xn----8sbhebeda0a3c5a7a.xn--p1ai/%D0%B2-%D1%81%D0%BB%D0%BE%D0%B2%D0%B5-%D0%BF%D1%80%D0%B8%D0%B2%D0%B5%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BD%D1%8B/
34:12 - пОмерли http://xn----8sbhebeda0a3c5a7a.xn--p1ai/%D0%B2-%D1%81%D0%BB%D0%BE%D0%B2%D0%B5-%D0%BF%D0%BE%D0%BC%D0%B5%D1%80%D0%BB%D0%B8/
(хотя в последнем случае можно и оставить - на простонародную прямую речь помЁрли ложится вполне).
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Thank you, Xenia, the sections are uploaded for spot-PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_07_garshin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_08_garshin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_17_garshin_128kb.mp3
Xenium5 wrote: на простонародную прямую речь помЁрли ложится вполне).
-- exactly the reason I said it this way :-)
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Sections 7 and 17 - PL OK.
Why didn't you change section 8 at 24:20? There still is some crack at the background :(
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Xenium5 wrote:Why didn't you change section 8 at 24:20? There still is some crack at the background :(
I apologize for missing that, fixed!
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_08_garshin_128kb.mp3 [26:12] ready for spot-PL
and a new section posted:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dii/shortstories_05_garshin_128kb.mp3 [26:14]
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