Mark, thank you so much for the feedback!!karlkuzmich wrote:Hello, Sara,
I'm glad you wish to record more of this book, you would like it; I was reading it as a teenager many years ago, and couldn't stop.
Here is my constructive feedback, please see it as encouragement, not criticism. All these little things would be a "PL OK" if you wouldn't ask ....
I will try to fix those mistakes as much as I can then re-upload the chapter. As I want it to be perfect.
I haven't finished reading the whole book, but so far I like it.