COMPLETE[FULL] Poetic Trios - Various - ke

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » May 29th, 2017, 3:51 pm

The Pied Piper is ready for PL. There's no hurry, I just had a good editing session.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_03_various_128kb.mp3

(16.50)

jburlinson · Post by **jburlinson** » May 29th, 2017, 7:42 pm

linny wrote:I have a couple of notes on 79. As always, you guys are the poetry folks so feel free to ignore what doesn't change intent.

9:00 repeat - is but proportion meet,

17:10-17:35 repeat - O EVE, in evil hour thou didst give care To that false Worm, of whomsoever taught To counterfeit

18:50 How shall I behold the face
Henceforth of God or Angel, earst with joy
And rapture so oft beheld? those heav'nly shapes
Will dazle now this earthly, with thir blaze
Insufferably bright.
I hear unsufferably

21:00 extra word - Is this the Love, is the recompence
Of mine to thee, ingrateful EVE, exprest
Immutable when thou wert lost, not I,
Who might have liv' and joyd immortal bliss,
Yet willingly chose rather Death with thee:
I hear is this the

Great ears! Thanks for catching all of these.

linny wrote: 22:25 And thou th' accuser. Thus it shall befall
Him who to worth in Women overtrusting
Lets her Will rule; restraint she will not brook,
I hear the. Should it be thy?

I think this "th'", is supposed to be "the", in this case.

Here's the new file:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_79_various_128kb.mp3
22:32

Thanks for all your hard work listening so carefully.

jburlinson · Post by **jburlinson** » May 29th, 2017, 7:44 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote:Section 16, Lenore, is up. John, you've really excelled yourself with the narration! I think I'll be listening to this on Halloween.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_16_various_128kb.mp3
(14.22)

Thanks for the feedback -- but you deserve the greater kudos here -- your mother/daughter act was really well done.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » May 30th, 2017, 12:02 am

My goodness, thank you!

At the risk of this descending into a mutual admiration society, last night editing the Pied Piper I really liked your salivating rat and pompous, avaricious alderman. I'm looking forward to hearing Paradise Lost put together.

linny · Post by **linny** » May 30th, 2017, 4:29 pm

Section 3, The Pied Piper is PL OK.

Section 79 is spot check PL OK.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » May 31st, 2017, 9:07 am

Thank you very much for being so prompt! And thank you, chaps, for your performances!

Linny, I've got rough edits for the three of the outstanding sections, but I'm going to slow down a shade - I'm looking forward to seeing this project in the catalogue, but I won't have the final sections completed in the next couple of days.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 3rd, 2017, 4:01 pm

Part 1 of Paradise Lost is ready for PL. Take your time - it's going to take me a while to get part 2!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_19_various_128kb.mp3
(33.09)

linny · Post by **linny** » June 4th, 2017, 7:34 am

PL OK!

No other PL work came in last night so thanks for the morning coffee time.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 5th, 2017, 2:12 pm

The Eve of St Agnes is ready for PL. Here's hoping it's useful for undergraduates everywhere!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_14_various_128kb.mp3

(27.44)

linny · Post by **linny** » June 6th, 2017, 6:51 am

PL OK! Almost there!

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 9th, 2017, 4:25 am

Paradise Lost part two is up. I would have been convinced by this serpent if I'd been there!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/poetictrios_20_various_128kb.mp3
(48.13)

linny · Post by **linny** » June 9th, 2017, 8:02 am

Hi Erin,
You left 10 seconds of ending silence on this one. You can decrease to 5 seconds if you want but not knowing if the 5 seconds for all endings rule is official yet I don't know if its really required. I'll let you decide.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » June 9th, 2017, 10:54 am

Hi Linny,

Thanks for double checking! I think I'll leave this at ten seconds, as it was when the project was launched.

Do you happen to know if the template has changed? I checked a couple of projects on the launch pad and neither of them had a five-seconds-across-the-board statement.

linny · Post by **linny** » June 9th, 2017, 10:58 am

The template wasn't changed. From my understanding we don't have control over the template so this will be like the file name and adding the _128kb for each new project.

In section 19 you only had 5 seconds of ending silence. Do you want to leave it and call the extra silence on 20 as longer for the end of the project?

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 9th, 2017, 10:59 am

Newgatenovelist wrote:Hi Linny,

Thanks for double checking! I think I'll leave this at ten seconds, as it was when the project was launched.

Do you happen to know if the template has changed? I checked a couple of projects on the launch pad and neither of them had a five-seconds-across-the-board statement.

I can answer the template-question: The template has not been changed. It is up to the BC and/or MC to change it at the start of new projects (thus, it is easy to forget doing it).

crossposted, linny is faster!