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Post by adonis » March 4th, 2016, 9:19 am

Thanks a lot. Clearly I am just a bit tired, it says Aegeon. Thank you.

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Post by adonis » March 4th, 2016, 9:23 am

This should be the next Act.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/comedyoferrors_antipholuss_02.mp3

Length: 7:53

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Post by AdeledePignerolles » March 4th, 2016, 10:02 am

Thanks so much!

Luciana Act 2 sounds great! There's just one PL note: @2:26 "When were you wont to use my sister thus" I hear "When you were wont to use my sister thus"
Thanks!

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Post by AdeledePignerolles » March 4th, 2016, 10:21 am

Antipholus Act 2 is PL OK! :)

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Post by adonis » March 4th, 2016, 10:27 am

Third Act. Resting now. Tomorrow the rest.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/comedyoferrors_antipholuss_03.mp3

Length: 7:41

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » March 4th, 2016, 10:58 am

Elijah,
What text did you read from? The Google Docs are not matching up with what you're saying. :hmm:
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Post by MaryAnnSpiegel » March 4th, 2016, 12:08 pm

Oh goodness, let's get this off the launch pad! Sorry about that. I've been traveling and didn't realize I hadn't moved the thread yet.

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Post by adonis » March 4th, 2016, 12:50 pm

Hope I got all the bits in this.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/comedyoferrors_antipholuss_04.mp3

Length: 3:05

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Post by ej400 » March 4th, 2016, 12:52 pm

EstherbenSimonides wrote:Elijah,
What text did you read from? The Google Docs are not matching up with what you're saying. :hmm:
I read it from gutenberg.org, I thought that it would be the same.

Sorry, I'll fix it.

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Post by adonis » March 4th, 2016, 1:28 pm

Last Act. Please say if there any missing bits. Well, you will, of course.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/comedyoferrors_antipholuss_05.mp3

Length: 4:16

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » March 4th, 2016, 1:47 pm

ej400 wrote:
I read it from gutenberg.org, I thought that it would be the same.

Sorry, I'll fix it.
Don't fix it yet. :) I've PLed Acts 1,2, and 3, and there really are very few mistakes. You can fix these for now, and I'll get to Acts 4 and 5 PLing later. :D
Act 1 PL notes:
From 0:30 to 2:25 can be cut out and replaced with "Twin brothers and sons to Aegion and Aemelia, but unknown to each other."; " Twin brothers, and attendants on the two Antipholuses."; and "Narrator read by...Elijah (or whatever you normally say.)"
2:30 should read "A hall in Duke Solinus's palace"
2:33 should read "Enter Duke Solinus, Aegeon, Jailer, Officers and other Attendants"
3:22 should just read "exit" (You can cut out the 'first merchant'.)
3:41 Could you cut out the bangs, please?

Act 2 PL notes:
0:14 missing 'by William Shakespeare'
0:38 should read "Enter Adriana and Luciana"
1:10 should read 'a public place'
1:25 Bangs you could cut out

Act 3 PL notes:
0:07 missing 'by William Shakespeare'
0:38-1:47 This scene needs to have the people's names.
1:56 should be 'the same'.
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Post by pschempf » March 4th, 2016, 2:15 pm

Fritz

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » March 4th, 2016, 2:23 pm

Acts 4 and 5 Narrator PL notes:
Act 4 PL notes:
0:14 missing 'by William Shakespeare'
0:18 Skip over 'all LibriVox' (the sentence probably needs to be read over again.)
0:49 should be 'court-uh-zan'
0:56 should just be 'exit'. (You can cut out the 'Dromio of Ephesus'.)
1:11 should be 'Exeunt Second Merchant, Angelo, Officer and Antipholus of Ephesus'(eh-fuh-sis).
1:53 should be 'A public place'
2:45 bangs you can get rid of.
2:55 should read 'and Pinch'.
3:02 bangs again
3:08 bang
3:29 should be 'they offer to bind Dromio of Ephesus (eh-fuh-sis).
4:06 This line doesn't appear in our text, so you can cut it out.

Act 5 PL notes:
0:16 cuts off the start of 'act'; this line probably needs to be re-recorded. (While you're at it, can you cut the 16 seconds of silence at the start?)
0:19 missing 'by William Shakespeare'
0:59 line should read 'Enter Adriana, Luciana, the courtezan (court-uh-zan) and others.'
1:15 missing at the end of the line 'Aemilia' (a (a long a, like its name) -meal-ee-ah)
1:41 should read 'Enter a servant'.
1:51 should be 'of eh-fuh-sis', again at 1:54
2:26 skip over 'All gather to see them'
3:14 should be 'End of act 5. End of the Comedy of Errors by William Shakespeare.'
Thanks Elijah! :D
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » March 4th, 2016, 2:42 pm

Antipholus of Syracuse, Luciana, and Aemilia Act 5 are all PL OK!
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