COMPLETE The Spanish Brothers by Deborah Alcock -rap

Post by **Rapunzelina** » November 5th, 2019, 2:41 pm

Chapter 32 for spotcheck: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_32_alcock_128kb.mp3 23:53

Chapter 34 for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_34_alcock_128kb.mp3 17:00

Chapter 33 had a couple of lines by Alcayde's servant and Benevidio's daughter, that I couldn't find in the MW. I've contacted SweetPea in case she can record those, if not, I'll advertise in the orphaned parts thread.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 6th, 2019, 6:11 am

32 is spot check PL OK.

34 is PL OK however I did notice that most of the characters were louder than the narration.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 6th, 2019, 6:14 am

SweetPea was in chapter 34, she isn't listed in 33.

Post by **Rapunzelina** » November 6th, 2019, 12:03 pm

linny wrote: ↑November 6th, 2019, 6:11 am 32 is spot check PL OK.

34 is PL OK however I did notice that most of the characters were louder than the narration.

Thank you! I applied some Compression on 34, I do hope it's at least a bit better. https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_34_alcock_128kb.mp3

And Chapter 35: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_35_alcock_128kb.mp3 19:16

linny · Post by **linny** » November 7th, 2019, 6:56 am

34 is MUCH better. Spot check PL OK.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 7th, 2019, 7:27 am

35 is PL OK. I did want to point one thing out in case you wanted to change it.

5:08 – The translation for the Spanish proverb is given. With the King or the Inquisition,
Hush! Hush!" From what I remember only the Spanish has been provided before and none of the translations. I prefer translation but wanted to point it out for consistence in case it was an oversight.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 7th, 2019, 7:43 am

I just realized there is no audio DP created for this project.

Post by **Rapunzelina** » November 7th, 2019, 4:31 pm

linny wrote: ↑November 7th, 2019, 7:27 am 35 is PL OK. I did want to point one thing out in case you wanted to change it.

5:08 – The translation for the Spanish proverb is given. With the King or the Inquisition,
Hush! Hush!" From what I remember only the Spanish has been provided before and none of the translations. I prefer translation but wanted to point it out for consistence in case it was an oversight.

I wondered the same thing when I got to this point, but decided to leave the translation. It had a nice flow.

linny wrote: ↑November 7th, 2019, 7:43 am I just realized there is no audio DP created for this project.

hmmm, what do you propose? I could collect the intros from the readers but I don't think everyone included a "role read by name" part...

Next 2 chapters:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_36_alcock_128kb.mp3 13:31
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_37_alcock_128kb.mp3 11:33

In Chapter 38, there are again some unassigned lines, belonging to Dona Inez, originally read by SweetPea. Rachel hasn't gotten back to me yet, so I think that will also go to the orphaned roles post, in the end so as to see what else is missing, and advertise for all together.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 7th, 2019, 5:35 pm

35- I like it as well especially since I don’t speak Spanish.

DP - if you want to do the intro/exit I can pull the characters together for you. I just finished editing Crime and Punishment so I have more time to help now if you need it.

Missing lines- Depending on where in the text the lines are they could also be read by the narrator. In some cases that may be better than a new voice.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 8th, 2019, 7:21 am

36 and 37 are both PL OK.

Post by **Rapunzelina** » November 8th, 2019, 12:44 pm

linny wrote: ↑November 7th, 2019, 5:35 pm I can pull the characters together for you.

You would do that? Thank you! It would be a tremendous help!

linny · Post by **linny** » November 8th, 2019, 3:48 pm

No problem at all.

When you read the intro/ending please include:

Narrated by and (your voice credit).

Post by **Rapunzelina** » November 9th, 2019, 2:46 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/spanishbrothers_00_alcock_128kb.mp3

I haven't done this particular thing before, so I am prepared to do it again if something is not right. I did my credit 2 different ways, so hopefully there is something there you can use.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 9th, 2019, 3:10 pm

I can work with that. Thank you!

benderca · Post by **benderca** » November 10th, 2019, 9:35 am

I don't know if this makes a difference of if it will be deleted anyway, but I just thought I'd mention that my character in Chapter 30 is Juliano El Chico, not Juan El Chico (Juan is a different character).

160 Chapter 30 AdeledePignerolles Duration 10:59 Chapter 30 Narrator, Carlos, Juan El Chico, Gaspar Benevidio