So, Marcio, I had a listen to your file and it's really very enjoyably and fluently narrated.
No problems understanding your reading.
But I found a couple of small errors, which I think need to be corrected. Now please, do NOT re-record the entire file again (I say that because some new readers did just that,
and it's too time consuming if only two small sentences are wrong). The easiest way to correct is recording the two sentences which are wrong once again in another Audacity file, noise-clean and amplify separately and then simply copy/paste them in the masterfile at the spot where the faulty sentences are.
> at 2:48
: (p. 343): "em que
cada um resumia a bellezza e a força do universo" - you omitted the words "em que". Well, I am not fluent enough in Portuguese to assess if this is an important error which changes the meaning of the sentence. So if you think the sentence is just as grammatically correct without these two words, then it's ok, you don't need to correct it
> at 3:28
: (p. 344): "sempre elle
só. Elle... E as fórmas
que sahiam...etc" - you inserted the words "as fórmas" in the beginning and left them out in the second sentence. I don't know how that could have happened.
I hear "sempre as formas
elle só. Elle.... E que
> at 15:07
: your recording stops too abruptly at the end. We have a standard of 5 seconds of silence
that we want to leave at the end of each recording. Could you please insert those 5 seconds ? Also at the beginning you start a bit abruptly, we usually leave 0.5 to 1 second of silence there too (not more). But you don't need to correct that for this section, only the 5 seconds at the end.
Please reupload the corrected section with the exact same filename (no "version 2" added to the name please). The new file will replace the old file in the Magic Window then.
Thanks ! Great first recording. Hopefully more to come.