The remainder of the chapters are draft edited. There was one more color coding issue but it's with my character so we are fine on that one.
Here is the outstanding issue:
Chapter 29: We need a voice for the role of Beedle. Both shades of green on page 4 should be read.
As narrator we need a couple of pickups:
Chapter 28: Tobias Ragg: This sudden retreat of the man was unexpected by Tobias, who at least thought it was the practice to feed people, even if they were confined to such a place; but the unceremonious departure of the keeper, without so much as mentioning anything about breakfast, began to make Tobias think that the plan by which he was to be got rid of was starvation; and yet that was impossible, for how easy it was to kill him if they felt so disposed! 'Oh, no, no,' he repeated to himself, 'surely they will not starve me to death.'
Chapter 28: Watson: 'Well,' said Mr Watson, as he saluted poor Tobias with a furious kick outside the door, 'what a deal of good you have done!'
Chapter 30: Voice credit needed: Old servant read by MA
As for the DP - you have given your voice credit a couple of different ways. I used full name for the narrator and MaryAnn for the minor roles. Let me know if that is what you want I can easily change that to all one way or the other.
I'm still working on the cast list but once we get the final Beadle cast I should have it ready for you.