[COMPLETE][Italiano] Alice nel Paese delle Meraviglie - kit

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fabiola
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Hi,
sorry very much for the delay.
Here's my recording. I hope it is good.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_05_carroll_128kb.mp3
Length: 13:18 min
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fabiola wrote: May 1st, 2019, 12:55 pm sorry very much for the delay.
<carefullylookingaround> I think we did survive ;)

Thank you :)
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Hi everybody, here is my recording, link is https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:47 :D
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Hi everybody, here is my recording,

Thank you :)
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rclerico wrote: May 2nd, 2019, 1:47 pm Hi everybody, here is my recording, link is https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:47 :D
Hi,
Your recording is just slightly outside the dB Librivox target range (86-92 dB) since it is 92,2 dB. Could you simply decrease the full recording level let' say of about 0,5 dB, using the Audacity amplifying tool?
It would be safer for me to check your recording after the modification, to be sure there aren't other variations.
Thanks,
Pier
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Hi Pier, recording updated and uploaded, link https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3
Length 17:47 :D
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rclerico wrote: May 3rd, 2019, 12:50 am Hi Pier, recording updated and uploaded, link https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3
Length 17:47 :D
Thanks, now the volume range is perfectly inside the librivox taget! :thumbs:
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fabiola wrote: May 1st, 2019, 12:55 pm Hi,
sorry very much for the delay.
Here's my recording. I hope it is good.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_05_carroll_128kb.mp3
Length: 13:18 min
Hi Fabiola,
your recording is good! :clap:
Just two remarks:
- at 4:18 minutes you forgot to read a few words in
“…tondo— che sembri un cedrïuolo, Eppur fai salti a ruota!— oh dimmi a quale scuola…”, “Eppur fai salti a ruota!” Is missing.
- At 1.06 you read aùstera, the correct reading should be austèra, with the accent on the e.

Just a couple of other remarks not really requiring necessarily a correction, but since you have to make a correction, you can revise them too, if you like:

- At the beginning (23 seconds) the correct pronunciation of Pietrocòla should be with the accent on the last o (see: https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teodorico_Pietrocola_Rossetti)
- At 13:04 you read “aveva>”; it is written “avea” ( really unimportant since the meaning is unchanged)

Please confirm me the corrections you made (some or all) when reloading the file.
Pier
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rclerico wrote: May 2nd, 2019, 1:47 pm Hi everybody, here is my recording, link is https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3
Duration 17:47 :D
Renzo, ti rispondo in italiano, visto che sei di Vicenza, se non sbaglio.
Ottima registrazione, quasi perfetta :9: .
Solo perché sono pignolo, ho notato al punto 12:37
che nella frase: “La maestra era una vecchia Testuggine—”
mi sembra che nella lettura si senta piuttosto “La maestra è una vecchia testuggine”

Mentre ci sono (da pignolone, appunto) al punto 5:17 mi sembra che tu legga “che non altrimenti”, piuttosto che “e non altrimenti”
Valuta tu stesso (come sempre preferisco lasciar fare al lettore quando si tratta di solo lievi possibili discostamenti, non significativi dal testo scritto) se vale la pena effettuare o meno una correzione. Dammi solo una conferma in merito, per confermare il PL O.K.
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Hi everybody, recording update and uploaded - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3 -, now its length is 17:48.
Cheers :D

@Pier: Ho corretto al punto 12:37, perché usare è invece di era cambia il senso dalla frase, al punto 5:17 invece non ho notato differenze dal testo, mi pare di dire correttamente e e non che.
Se ti va bene così ... , ho ricariato la registrazione modificata come sopra detto.
Fammi sapere. Ciao
Renzo
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rclerico wrote: May 3rd, 2019, 9:06 am Hi everybody, recording update and uploaded - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/alicenelpaesemeraviglie_09_carroll_128kb.mp3 -, now its length is 17:48.
Cheers :D

@Pier: Ho corretto al punto 12:37, perché usare è invece di era cambia il senso dalla frase, al punto 5:17 invece non ho notato differenze dal testo, mi pare di dire correttamente e e non che.
Se ti va bene così ... , ho ricariato la registrazione modificata come sopra detto.
Fammi sapere. Ciao
Renzo
Va benissimo :clap: . in effetti anch'io non ero sicuro se al punto 5:17 sentivo "e" o "che".
PL O.K.
Pier
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Thank you very much, the both of you :D
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We have an orphan :( I didn't get any response for a month, I hope the reader is well.
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ok in that case I better move us back to Readers Wanted ;)

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Hi, I claim section 1 (if you agree) :wink:
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