COMPLETE [PLAY] The Recruiting Officer by Geo Farquhar-ma

Post by **ToddHW** » June 12th, 2015, 11:51 pm

Thank you!

Todd

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 12th, 2015, 11:55 pm

Oh, we posted simultaneously and the thread page changed, easy to miss my last post, I'll repeat: Act 1 is PL OK

Post by **ToddHW** » June 13th, 2015, 12:19 am

Rapunzelina wrote:Oh, we posted simultaneously and the thread page changed, easy to miss my last post, I'll repeat: Act 1 is PL OK

And again thanks!

Todd

Kristingj · Post by **Kristingj** » June 13th, 2015, 5:43 am

Here are the missing lines of Justice Balance:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_justicebalance_2_extra.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_justicebalance_5_extra.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » June 13th, 2015, 6:00 am

Great!

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » June 14th, 2015, 4:03 pm

Acts 3, 4, 5 for final PL. Have a couple extra lines to go into Act 2 before it will be ready.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_3_farquhar_128kb.mp3

length 29:26

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_4_farquhar_128kb.mp3

length 26:12

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_5_farquhar_128kb.mp3

length 25:49

Thanks, Todd

ZamesCurran · Post by **ZamesCurran** » June 14th, 2015, 4:50 pm

ToddHW wrote:Acts 3, 4, 5 for final PL. Have a couple extra lines to go into Act 2 before it will be ready.

Oh, so I'm officially the guy holding this project up.....

Here's my last piece...

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_costarpearman_2_missinglines.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » June 14th, 2015, 5:44 pm

And with those lines (thanks!!), here is Act 2 for final PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/recruitingofficer_2_farquhar_128kb.mp3

length 24:27

Thanks, Todd

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » June 14th, 2015, 6:03 pm

Todd,
In the MW, have you listed every reader in the project for each of the acts? Or just those readers who contributed to the act in question?
MaryAnn

Post by **ToddHW** » June 14th, 2015, 6:08 pm

MaryAnnSpiegel wrote:Todd,
In the MW, have you listed every reader in the project for each of the acts? Or just those readers who contributed to the act in question?
MaryAnn

I copied the same thing into every act. I figured a play was not like a DR where there is a lot of difference between the players from chapter to chapter? But I will go and remove names from acts where the readers are not - I didn't delete all the extra MW sections yet so I still know who spoke (or didn't speak) when....

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 14th, 2015, 11:35 pm

I'm downloading Act II for PL!

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 15th, 2015, 12:27 am

One little note for act 2:
At the very end, near 24:18 I think there is a misplaced "I" that should go with the other "I" near 24:10.

Downloading the rest of the Acts now!

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 15th, 2015, 1:21 am

Something optional for Act 3, because it may have been your choice as the editor, but I'll mention it in case you meant to add them but missed them, there is an "[Aside." in the text that perhaps should be added at 9:13, before "Come, honest friend, you shall go to my quarters instead of the captain's" and also another "[Aside." in the text that perhaps should be added at 14:14, before "I question it much." And, at around 21:55 there's a "[To Plume." that perhaps should go between Brazen's "Ay" and "my dear!" instead of after it. ?
Otherwise, Act 3 is PL OK!

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 15th, 2015, 8:56 am

Acts 4 and 5 are PL OK!
This is indeed a humorous and enjoyable play!

Post by **ToddHW** » June 15th, 2015, 8:59 am

Rapunzelina wrote:Acts 4 and 5 are PL OK!
This is indeed a humorous and enjoyable play!

Thanks - I'll take a look at the Act 2 and 3 comments and fix them.

Farquhar wrote a couple more plays that look good at Gutenberg - after the High June cleanup is done I'll probably post one of them...

Thanks, Todd