There are a few observations:
- 00:20 - you said 'stand of living' instead of 'standard of living'
07:42 - you said enriched instead of encircled in the sentence " ...he has thrown off on all sides have encircled him.
16:46 - you said adorned instead of unadorned
Other than these minor errors, it's all good. I'm looking forward to reading/listening more of Tagore's reminiscenes!