[COMPLETE]]My Reminiscences by Rabindranath Tagore

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Post by anushar04 » June 24th, 2014, 11:50 am

Section 3 was a good reading, balaonspace!

There are a few observations:
  • 00:20 - you said 'stand of living' instead of 'standard of living'
07:03 - in the poem, you missed the word 'from' in the line "With tangled roots hanging down from your branches,..."
07:42 - you said enriched instead of encircled in the sentence " ...he has thrown off on all sides have encircled him.
16:46 - you said adorned instead of unadorned

Other than these minor errors, it's all good. I'm looking forward to reading/listening more of Tagore's reminiscenes!
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Post by balaonspace » June 24th, 2014, 1:21 pm

Here are another 3 sections

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_04_tagore_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_05_tagore_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_06_tagore_128kb.mp3

I also made the last two corrections for section 3 and reuploaded it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_03_tagore_128kb.mp3

I appreciate that you put a lot of effort in PLing. Let me know whatever you find out of place, but I might not fix all of them. In some places editing makes the recording worse than it already is.

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Post by anushar04 » June 24th, 2014, 9:43 pm

balaonspace wrote: I appreciate that you put a lot of effort in PLing. Let me know whatever you find out of place, but I might not fix all of them. In some places editing makes the recording worse than it already is.
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I agree with you, editing is a pain. I apologize for being too thorough! I'll just note down where I think the meaning changes, then. :)

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Post by anushar04 » June 25th, 2014, 12:05 am

Section 3 is now PL Okay!
Sections 4 and 6 are PL Okay!

Section 5:
At 00:20 - you said "they could never have had" instead of "they could never have made the same impression."

Rabindranath Tagore is such a delight to read. And your readings remind me of my father. :)

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Post by balaonspace » June 26th, 2014, 11:45 am

I am glad you enjoy this project. I think section 5 is good without the correction. But do keep noting every error you find, I will make sure they are addressed.

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Post by balaonspace » June 29th, 2014, 1:19 pm

Here are 4 more sections

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_07_tagore_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_08_tagore_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_09_tagore_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/darvinia/myreminiscences_10_tagore_128kb.mp3

Please ignore these mistakes when PLing. I feel that the sections are fine without correcting them.

Ch VII
2:50 missed the word 'made'
5:05 missed the word 'big'
6:05 change of words "impress on us" to 'impress us on'
9:45 mispelled 'palliatives' as 'pallitatives'

Ch VIII
3:35 chnged the word 'bengal village' to 'bengali village'
6:00 change of words 'where am i' to 'where i am'

Ch X
0:15 change of words 'get again' to 'meet again'

Let me know if there are any more.

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Post by anushar04 » July 2nd, 2014, 8:29 am

Sections 8 and 9 are PL OK!

section 7
01:50 - missed 'hot'
02:21 - said 'college' instead of 'school'

section 10:
01:20 - said natural 'charm' instead of natural 'claim'
04:37 - missed footnote no. 18
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Post by balaonspace » July 3rd, 2014, 12:10 pm

I made the corrections, the new files are in MW.

In section 7 the wrod college and school is used interchangeably, so you may ignore that.

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Post by anushar04 » July 3rd, 2014, 12:55 pm

Sections 7 & 10 are now PL OK.

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Post by balaonspace » July 7th, 2014, 12:38 pm

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Post by anushar04 » July 10th, 2014, 12:44 am

Sections 11, 12 and 13 are PL OKAY! Great going. :)
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Post by anushar04 » July 25th, 2014, 1:01 am

Section 14 is PL OK!
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Post by balaonspace » July 28th, 2014, 11:42 am

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Post by anushar04 » July 29th, 2014, 9:30 am

Section 15:
3:13 - said astromical instead of astronomical in the sentence "...treated me to an astronomical discourse."
3:18 - missed ‘highest’ in the sentence "The house we had taken at Bakrota was on the highest hill-top"
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