COMPLETE [PLAY] Cain: A Mystery by Lord Byron - rap

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Post by abendlied » June 16th, 2014, 7:45 am

JoFriday21 wrote:I'll read Zillah.
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Post by abendlied » June 16th, 2014, 7:46 am

Availle wrote:It appears that you'll still need a narrator for this... I have some time :wink:
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Post by Availle » June 17th, 2014, 6:30 pm

Here's the narrator, I hope I haven't missed anything:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_1.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_2.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_3.flac

By the way, just before the entrance of the angel in Act 3, there are two occurrences of a "voice from within". This is already the angel speaking. You may want to mention that to whomever is reading the angel later on.
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Post by Tortilla » June 18th, 2014, 10:01 am

Could I take Adah?
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Post by unreadpages » June 20th, 2014, 11:12 pm

Act 1 of Cain (the character)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_cain_01.flac
Duration 17:19

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Post by LibbyG » June 23rd, 2014, 9:31 am

Can I read the angel?
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Post by abendlied » June 23rd, 2014, 10:17 am

Eeep! So sorry that I've been gone from this topic for a few days!! I was called out of town unexpectedly for a job interview. I'm back now though!

Availle and Peter, thanks so much for the recordings! I'll put them up in the window and I should be able to PL them by the end of tomorrow :D

Tortilla, I'll sign you up for Adah!

And Libby, I'll sign you up for the Angel! As Availle pointed out, the Angel's first two lines in Act 3 are tagged as "A Voice from within," just as a heads up!

And now we're only one role away from being completely cast! I'm so excited for this to come together!

Thanks!!
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Post by abendlied » June 24th, 2014, 9:32 am

Availle wrote:Here's the narrator, I hope I haven't missed anything:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_1.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_2.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_3.flac

By the way, just before the entrance of the angel in Act 3, there are two occurrences of a "voice from within". This is already the angel speaking. You may want to mention that to whomever is reading the angel later on.
The narration sounds great, thanks Availle! Act 2 and 3 are PL OK! :D

Act 1 is missing one tiny piece of stage direction, the line "Cain, to Lucifer" It comes after Adah's entrance, around the 1:26 mark in your recording. The beginning of the Act 2 recording is also on the end of Act 1, but that really doesn't matter, since I'll be cutting it all up anyway, so I wouldn't worry about it. Everything else in Act 1 is ready to go!

Thanks!
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Post by TriciaG » June 24th, 2014, 9:34 am

Looks like you just need an Eve. I'll take on that role, if you like. :)
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Post by abendlied » June 24th, 2014, 9:58 am

TriciaG wrote:Looks like you just need an Eve. I'll take on that role, if you like. :)
Fantastic!! Signing you up now, thanks!

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Post by abendlied » June 24th, 2014, 10:09 am

unreadpages wrote:Act 1 of Cain (the character)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_cain_01.flac
Duration 17:19

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Cain's Act 1 is PL OK! :thumbs: Great reading as well! I love the highs and lows in your delivery - Cain is such a conflicted character, he can be bombastic one moment and tender the next, and I think you really captured that :)

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Post by TriciaG » June 24th, 2014, 10:10 am

Here you go!

I noise cleaned but did not adjust volume, so they're probably too loud. I also have these raw (uncleaned), if you want them that way for some reason.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_01.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_02.flac
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Post by abendlied » June 24th, 2014, 12:06 pm

TriciaG wrote:Here you go!

I noise cleaned but did not adjust volume, so they're probably too loud. I also have these raw (uncleaned), if you want them that way for some reason.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_01.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_02.flac
No worries about the volume - I'll adjust them all when I put everything together! And the files sound fine with the noise cleaning you did, so I don't think I"ll need the raw ones. Thanks though!

Act 1 is PL OK! :thumbs:

Act 3 has just one small fix, at 0:46 - "eternal Spirit's curse" should be "eternal Serpent's curse." I know it's a little nitpicky, but I think "eternal Spirit" sounds a bit too much like it could refer to God or other angels, and might make the line a touch confusing.

Otherwise, everything else is spot on!

Thanks so much!!
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Post by TriciaG » June 24th, 2014, 12:33 pm

Fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_03.flac

It makes total sense to me to fix that. I also redid part of the next line; "seed" didn't come through very clearly the first time.

And I named this one correctly (03 instead of 02). :roll: :lol:
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Post by abendlied » June 24th, 2014, 12:44 pm

TriciaG wrote:Fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_03.flac

It makes total sense to me to fix that. I also redid part of the next line; "seed" didn't come through very clearly the first time.

And I named this one correctly (03 instead of 02). :roll: :lol:
Thank you for changing it!! Act 3 is now PL OK :thumbs:

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