COMPLETE [PLAY] Cain: A Mystery by Lord Byron - rap

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 16th, 2014, 7:45 am

JoFriday21 wrote:I'll read Zillah.

Thanks! I've signed you up

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 16th, 2014, 7:46 am

Availle wrote:It appears that you'll still need a narrator for this... I have some time

Yay! You're signed up!

Post by **Availle** » June 17th, 2014, 6:30 pm

Here's the narrator, I hope I haven't missed anything:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_1.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_2.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_3.flac

By the way, just before the entrance of the angel in Act 3, there are two occurrences of a "voice from within". This is already the angel speaking. You may want to mention that to whomever is reading the angel later on.

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » June 18th, 2014, 10:01 am

Could I take Adah?

unreadpages · Post by **unreadpages** » June 20th, 2014, 11:12 pm

Act 1 of Cain (the character)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_cain_01.flac
Duration 17:19

Peter

LibbyG · Post by **LibbyG** » June 23rd, 2014, 9:31 am

Can I read the angel?

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 23rd, 2014, 10:17 am

Eeep! So sorry that I've been gone from this topic for a few days!! I was called out of town unexpectedly for a job interview. I'm back now though!

Availle and Peter, thanks so much for the recordings! I'll put them up in the window and I should be able to PL them by the end of tomorrow

Tortilla, I'll sign you up for Adah!

And Libby, I'll sign you up for the Angel! As Availle pointed out, the Angel's first two lines in Act 3 are tagged as "A Voice from within," just as a heads up!

And now we're only one role away from being completely cast! I'm so excited for this to come together!

Thanks!!
Sarah

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 24th, 2014, 9:32 am

Availle wrote:Here's the narrator, I hope I haven't missed anything:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_1.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_2.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_narrator_3.flac

By the way, just before the entrance of the angel in Act 3, there are two occurrences of a "voice from within". This is already the angel speaking. You may want to mention that to whomever is reading the angel later on.

The narration sounds great, thanks Availle! Act 2 and 3 are PL OK!

Act 1 is missing one tiny piece of stage direction, the line "Cain, to Lucifer" It comes after Adah's entrance, around the 1:26 mark in your recording. The beginning of the Act 2 recording is also on the end of Act 1, but that really doesn't matter, since I'll be cutting it all up anyway, so I wouldn't worry about it. Everything else in Act 1 is ready to go!

Thanks!
Sarah

Post by **TriciaG** » June 24th, 2014, 9:34 am

Looks like you just need an Eve. I'll take on that role, if you like.

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 24th, 2014, 9:58 am

TriciaG wrote:Looks like you just need an Eve. I'll take on that role, if you like.

Fantastic!! Signing you up now, thanks!

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 24th, 2014, 10:09 am

unreadpages wrote:Act 1 of Cain (the character)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_cain_01.flac
Duration 17:19

Peter

Cain's Act 1 is PL OK!

Great reading as well! I love the highs and lows in your delivery - Cain is such a conflicted character, he can be bombastic one moment and tender the next, and I think you really captured that

Post by **TriciaG** » June 24th, 2014, 10:10 am

Here you go!

I noise cleaned but did not adjust volume, so they're probably too loud. I also have these raw (uncleaned), if you want them that way for some reason.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_01.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_02.flac

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 24th, 2014, 12:06 pm

TriciaG wrote:Here you go!

I noise cleaned but did not adjust volume, so they're probably too loud. I also have these raw (uncleaned), if you want them that way for some reason.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_01.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_02.flac

No worries about the volume - I'll adjust them all when I put everything together! And the files sound fine with the noise cleaning you did, so I don't think I"ll need the raw ones. Thanks though!

Act 1 is PL OK!

Act 3 has just one small fix, at 0:46 - "eternal Spirit's curse" should be "eternal Serpent's curse." I know it's a little nitpicky, but I think "eternal Spirit" sounds a bit too much like it could refer to God or other angels, and might make the line a touch confusing.

Otherwise, everything else is spot on!

Thanks so much!!
Sarah

Post by **TriciaG** » June 24th, 2014, 12:33 pm

Fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_03.flac

It makes total sense to me to fix that. I also redid part of the next line; "seed" didn't come through very clearly the first time.

And I named this one correctly (03 instead of 02).

abendlied · Post by **abendlied** » June 24th, 2014, 12:44 pm

TriciaG wrote:Fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/cain_eve_03.flac

It makes total sense to me to fix that. I also redid part of the next line; "seed" didn't come through very clearly the first time.

And I named this one correctly (03 instead of 02).

Thank you for changing it!! Act 3 is now PL OK