(Didn't need the "More" and "Continued" at 2:00 - I think that's just marking a page turn. Easily ignored during editing.)cmbyrne wrote:Here is  Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/rur_narrator_actone.mp3
I hope I got all the stage directions - some were not in brackets so I may have missed them
Missing lines at 2:07
Missing line at 2:12: MARIUS exits with ROBOTS.He rings for MARIUS.
Then they die?
Yes, they get used up.
Marius, bring in samples of the Manual Labor Robot.
Missing lines at 2:14
Missing lines at 2:16He rings for SULLA.
I didn't notice her.
Missing line at 2:21: Enter MARIUS.(Feels the skin on Sulla's face)
Feel her face.
Oh, no, no.
You wouldn't know that she's made of different material from
us, would you? Turn round, Sulla.
Oh, stop, stop.
Talk to Miss Glory, Sulla.
Please sit down.
Missing line at 2:28: From the right enter MR. FABRY, DR. GALL, DR. HALLEMEIER, MR. ALQUIST.
Missing line at 2:29: BUSMAN rushes in from the right.
Missing line at 2:44: All rush out except DOMIN and HELENA.
Loud click at 2:45
Missing line at 2:59: HELENA looks at him.
At the very end you need 5-10 seconds of silence (it will depend on how long the assembled act end up being - best to put 10 seconds when you do narration). Currently there is a thump at the very end.
(By the way, you want to make corrections backwards from the end so that the timings in the PL notes don't get messed up!)