COMPLETE [DRAM.READ] His Last Bow (Sherlock Holmes) - rap

jeanie1914 · Post by **jeanie1914** » May 25th, 2014, 12:42 am

Here is Section 18_Butler (to Mr Smith) Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_18_butlertomrsmith_08.mp3
length: 00:20
Jeanie

Cori · Post by **Cori** » May 25th, 2014, 10:20 am

And Watson's section 3 ... https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_03_watson.mp3 (13.24)

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 25th, 2014, 2:27 pm

Everyone has been so busy this weekend! I have some catching up to do!

Norman · Post by **Norman** » May 25th, 2014, 4:14 pm

Might i have Warner in Chapt 2? You know the American former gardener of High Gable. Maybe he didn't use to be American, but he could be.

Norman

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 25th, 2014, 4:29 pm

Norman wrote:Might i have Warner in Chapt 2? You know the American former gardener of High Gable. Maybe he didn't use to be American, but he could be.

Norman

Love to have you! I'll update the MW later today.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 25th, 2014, 6:56 pm

jeanie1914 wrote:Here is Section 18_Butler (to Mr Smith) Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_18_butlertomrsmith_08.mp3
length: 00:20
Jeanie

Thanks Jeanie, this is PL OK!

Norman · Post by **Norman** » May 25th, 2014, 9:53 pm

Here is Warner chapter 2.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_02_warner.mp3
00:58

This makes me feel good. When I realize how long the "takes and edits" take me to read 58 seconds of Warner, it makes me feel like i am much more productive on my other recordings where 20 minutes recording only takes me about 4 to 5 hours. At the rate i do Warner, 20 minutes of my normal project would take me 20 hours.

So if anything doesn't fit your directorial goals, feel free to ask me to re-do or edit!

Norm

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 26th, 2014, 8:43 pm

Norman wrote:Here is Warner chapter 2.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_02_warner.mp3
00:58

Warner is PL OK!

I agree, the editing and checking takes much longer than the actual recording!

Post by **TriciaG** » May 27th, 2014, 10:59 am

May I voice Vicar Roundhay?

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 27th, 2014, 1:52 pm

TriciaG wrote:May I voice Vicar Roundhay?

Love to have you!

Only 2 roles left!

Post by **TriciaG** » May 27th, 2014, 2:08 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_10_vicar.mp3 (2:42)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_11_vicar.mp3 (0:29)

Cori · Post by **Cori** » May 28th, 2014, 2:08 am

Watson again, a couple of lovely shorties:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_04_watson.mp3 (6.32)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_05_watson.mp3 (6.37)

I was looking at the rest of the stories, and the final one seems to be written in the third person. I wonder if that might be better with a different narrator entirely? That is, with Watson's lines inserted as just another character, since I'd find it a bit odd to talk about 'myself' like that.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 28th, 2014, 5:37 am

Cori wrote:Watson again, a couple of lovely shorties:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_04_watson.mp3 (6.32)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_05_watson.mp3 (6.37)

I was looking at the rest of the stories, and the final one seems to be written in the third person. I wonder if that might be better with a different narrator entirely? That is, with Watson's lines inserted as just another character, since I'd find it a bit odd to talk about 'myself' like that.

Now you mention it, I think you are right. I'll fix the script and add a new Watson section separate from the narrator.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 29th, 2014, 5:10 pm

TriciaG wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_10_vicar.mp3 (2:42)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/hislastbow_11_vicar.mp3 (0:29)

These are both PL fantastic! I felt so sorry for you with your "devil ridden parish"!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 29th, 2014, 5:15 pm

Cori wrote: I was looking at the rest of the stories, and the final one seems to be written in the third person. I wonder if that might be better with a different narrator entirely? That is, with Watson's lines inserted as just another character, since I'd find it a bit odd to talk about 'myself' like that.

OK, I've gone back and changed all that and requested a new narrator for that chapter only. You only have about 6 lines in Chapter 12 now!

I think under the circumstances I *am* going to need a voice credit for you as Dr John Watson though, in the other chapters, but don't do it until I've PLed those chapters, just in case there are any other changes. But please put one in for the first chapter of each story, where it is marked in the scripts. (Chapters 1, 3, 4, 6, 8, 9, 10 and of course 12.) There will not be a voice credit section in the chapters which are a second part of a story - I've got them all together in the first part.