[COMPLETE] Modern Magic by Professor Hoffman - tg

dread · Post by **dread** » November 23rd, 2015, 4:00 pm

Section 40 is very well done. Just a couple of fixes.

2:51
Used on for of
"by the sound of the tap of the wand on the bottle"

16:50
Used ali for all
"with bran gummed all over it" (type not easy to read)

-- Bill

dread · Post by **dread** » November 24th, 2015, 7:50 am

Here are editing notes for Section 46.

Again, very good job. I have three suggestions.

14:06
Used within for with
"depressed with the object to be changed"

17:48
Inserted to
"for affixing [to] it to the under"

19:55
Used pedestals for pedals
"Where three or four pedals are"

-- Bill

dread · Post by **dread** » November 24th, 2015, 10:32 am

Here are editing notes for Section 47.

11:31
Used ingenuous for ingenious
"The ingenious reader will readily guess"

16:41
Used removable for movable
"Some stars have a movable stud at the side"

-- Bill

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » November 26th, 2015, 10:50 am

Revised 40, 46, 47. No run time difference from the originals.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/modernmagic_40_hoffman_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/modernmagic_46_hoffman_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/modernmagic_47_hoffman_128kb.mp3

dread · Post by **dread** » November 26th, 2015, 2:49 pm

Section 40 is PL OK.

-- Bill

dread · Post by **dread** » November 26th, 2015, 2:57 pm

Section 46 is PL OK.

-- Bill

dread · Post by **dread** » November 26th, 2015, 4:18 pm

Section 47 is PL OK.

-- Bill

Post by **TriciaG** » December 2nd, 2015, 7:36 pm

I'm claiming the final 2 sections. I will hopefully finish them this week.

dread · Post by **dread** » December 3rd, 2015, 9:46 am

TriciaG wrote:I'm claiming the final 2 sections. I will hopefully finish them this week.

All right!

-- Bill

Post by **TriciaG** » December 3rd, 2015, 4:46 pm

Section 41 is up:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/modernmagic_41_hoffman_128kb.mp3
19:53

Post by **TriciaG** » December 4th, 2015, 11:00 am

And section 45 is up:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/modernmagic_45_hoffman_128kb.mp3
28:27

When they're PL'd, we'll be done!

dread · Post by **dread** » December 5th, 2015, 5:11 pm

Here are editing notes for Section 41.

Nearly perfect.

7:33
Repeat unless it may

-- Bill

dread · Post by **dread** » December 6th, 2015, 3:10 pm

Section 45 is PL OK.

Congrats!

-- Bill

Post by **TriciaG** » December 6th, 2015, 6:00 pm

Thanks!

I've made the edit on 41, and trust myself on it, so I'm going straight to cataloging.

Post by **TriciaG** » December 7th, 2015, 6:32 am

This project is now complete! All audio files can be found on our catalog page: http://librivox.org/modern-magic-by-professor-louis-hoffman/