I'm sorry, but I can't accept the file like this. For the editors and DPLs we really need each chapter as a separate file.
I've also done the PL, so you can make all the changes at once!
The first line is missing a word. It should be: "Are we not yet
at the end of this doleful place?" (The "yet" was missing. This is important because two characters are speaking the same line and it needs to match or the listener won't be able to understand it.) I suggest re-recording the whole line, as it will be smoother (and probably easier) than trying to insert one word, but it's up to you how you do it.
Chapter 7 is PL OK!
(You can just cut this and paste it into a new file as is.)
Chapter 8: Line should be "and so will we
too" (word order is incorrect, and again, this line is being spoken by a group so it needs to be exactly the same.)
To help you remember, the line before it is Mr Honest saying "I will" so the boys are now saying "So will we". I often find the context helps!
When you've made these corrections and reuploaded the three new files, just post the links back here and I'll spot check them! Thanks!