In spite of the rambling sentences in the journal your narration was splendid as always.boojumuk wrote:There might be the odd word out in this section, it's very difficult reading a passage written in the vernacular. Some of the sentences are rather rambling and don't make grammatical sense, but I hope it's understandable.
The only thing to note was the opening journal date was left out should you wish to add it in.
@:18 "15th January 1912"--
Hope you're off relaxing and enjoying your holiday.