[COMPLETE] Short Poetry Collection 116 - tg
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Casey at the Bat has been corrected and uploaded again.
4:37 ..this time
4:37 ..this time
Peruvian owls always hunt in pairs because they are inca hoots.
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
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Thanks, both!
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
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The Dancing Girl
0:51 - read "The reddest that was ever grown" text: "that ever was"
1:10 - read "and here by the Carib it's known" text: "As here"
0:51 - read "The reddest that was ever grown" text: "that ever was"
1:10 - read "and here by the Carib it's known" text: "As here"
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
sorry about that
duration: 1:39.89
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_thedancinggirl_johnson_tm.mp3
duration: 1:39.89
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_thedancinggirl_johnson_tm.mp3
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PL OK!
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Hello Tricia,
Here is the poem "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson as a contribution for the short poetry collection. Please, let me know what you think about it.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/171619
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc_hopeisthethingwithfeathers_dickinson_eb.mp3
Length : 00:00:52
Thank you
Etel Buss
Here is the poem "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson as a contribution for the short poetry collection. Please, let me know what you think about it.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/171619
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc_hopeisthethingwithfeathers_dickinson_eb.mp3
Length : 00:00:52
Thank you
Etel Buss
Hello Tricia,
Please, disregard my last email, this is the correct one
Here is the poem "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson as a contribution for the short poetry collection. Please, let me know what you think about it.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/171619
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_hopeisthethingwithfeathers_dickinson_eb.mp3
Length : 00:00:52
Thank you
Etel Buss
Please, disregard my last email, this is the correct one
Here is the poem "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson as a contribution for the short poetry collection. Please, let me know what you think about it.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/171619
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_hopeisthethingwithfeathers_dickinson_eb.mp3
Length : 00:00:52
Thank you
Etel Buss
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Etel - the recording is great, but I notice there's a copyright notice on the page: "Copyright 1945, 1951, 8 1955, 1979, 1983 by the President and Fellows of Harvard College. Reprinted with the permission of The Belknap Press of Harvard University Press." We'll need to find a different source for it (one that isn't under copyright).
EDIT: I found it here: http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/dickin01.html#15 so I'll use that as the source.
EDIT: I found it here: http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/dickin01.html#15 so I'll use that as the source.
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
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Okay, I think I got them fixed. I reuploaded with the same file name. Duration: 11:23TriciaG wrote:I liked the poem! Here's what I found:CaprishaPage wrote:Great! Thanks, Tricia! Here is the second! Feels good to have these submitted earlier! I don't usually do poems this long, but I thought this one was interesting. I think I caught most of the errors, but there is a lot of poem here.
Old Souls by Thomas Gordon Hake (1809–94)
1:05 (line 18) - read "could rise it to a sense of life" should be "rouse"
2:44 (line 49) - read "unannaled" should be "un-annealed" (a-NEELD) - your choice if you want to fix.
3:31 (line 66) - read "when in the morning hymn" should be "when it"
5:00 (line 98) - read "the downright stroke" should be "downward"
5:18 (line 103) - read "as time comes on" should be "as night"
5:25 (line 106) - read "he busies on his own affairs" should be "still busied"
6:48 (line 134) - read "he is the workhouse" should be "he is in"
8:01 (line 160) - read "smiles back on his own" should be "smiles back his own" (no "on")
9:13 (line 186) - read "while from his side fresh ichor falls" should be "flows"
10:24 (line 212) - read "set him up and pull him down" should be "put"
10:47 - a loud snap sound in this line: "No mitre on his forehead sits"
I edited out the section of audio with the loud snap and recorded that bit, but when I play it back, it still sounds like it is there. Would you check that for me, and let me know what you think? I haven't encountered that before. It has me baffled. It could be my speakers or that I am anticipating it. But let me know what you think.
Thanks! Caprisha
Caprisha
I am half agony, half hope. -Jane Austen
I am half agony, half hope. -Jane Austen
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Hmmm. The first 3 edits weren't done. Is this really the edited file?
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
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Oh, that must have been the wrong file! Sorry! I will give it another upload go tomorrow.TriciaG wrote:Hmmm. The first 3 edits weren't done. Is this really the edited file?
Caprisha
I am half agony, half hope. -Jane Austen
I am half agony, half hope. -Jane Austen
Greetings!
Here' my 1st submission:
A Sonnet of the Moon by Charles Best (1570–1627)
Text URL: http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/best01.html#1
MP3 URL: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_asonnetofthemoon_best_nkg.mp3
Duration: 1:18
Nattalia Godwin
Here' my 1st submission:
A Sonnet of the Moon by Charles Best (1570–1627)
Text URL: http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/best01.html#1
MP3 URL: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/spc116_asonnetofthemoon_best_nkg.mp3
Duration: 1:18
Nattalia Godwin
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Welcome! Do you want "Nattalia Godwin" to be your catalog name (what shows up on the catalog pages)?
Two small things:
- The volume is too low. It's at 81.2, so it needs to come up about 8 dB. If you amplify, you'll need to do noise cleaning as well. Are you familiar with these processes, or do you need pointers?
- at 1:00, you read, "So as you come and as you depart". Text is "So as you come and as you do depart". It's a minor variance, but I know sonnets are very strict on number of syllables per line, so I mention it in case you want to change it.
Two small things:
- The volume is too low. It's at 81.2, so it needs to come up about 8 dB. If you amplify, you'll need to do noise cleaning as well. Are you familiar with these processes, or do you need pointers?
- at 1:00, you read, "So as you come and as you depart". Text is "So as you come and as you do depart". It's a minor variance, but I know sonnets are very strict on number of syllables per line, so I mention it in case you want to change it.
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Humor: My Lady Nicotine