llc324 - nice reading!
Tech specs and volume are OK on the file. Just watch your popping P sounds. You have a couple plosives. This is when your breath directly hits the microphone on letters like P, F, or TH. Move your microphone a little bit to the side of your mouth if a desktop mic, or a little above or below your mouth if a headset mic. This will help the air pass by the mic instead of directly hitting it.
Here are the things I noted as I listened against the text:
0:00-0:16 - instead of the full LV disclaimer, you can simply say, "Dark Spirit of Desart Rude By Percy Shelley. Read for LibriVox.org by Leta Campbell."
0:22 - said, "each tangled and
un-troded wood" should be "
untrodden" (short O, like "un-broaden")
0:25 - said, "where
silent's gleamings never glow" should be "
sunlight's"
0:46 - missed this line: "That flaps its wing o'er the leafless oak"
1:31 - said, "the buds have
bursted their frozen sleep" should be "
burst"
1:48 - said, "whose giant oak dead lichens
bend" should be "
bind"
1:49 - said, "
Moaning, sighing in the wind" should be "
moaningly"
1:51 - said, "
whose huge loose rocks" should be "
with"
2:14 - Outro for poetry is, "End of poem. This recording is in the public domain."
Needs a total of 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Make these edits, then post the file again. Use the same file name as your previous one, and post in the thread when it's uploaded and the new run time.
Edit sounds fine to me. PL OK!
