Grim: The Story of a Pike - phi

Post by **philchenevert** » January 13th, 2013, 10:20 pm

Alfian wrote:I've just uploaded chapter 2:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike__02_fleuron.mp3
Phil - your editing video was perfect for me. Thank you so much.
Daniel

Thanks Daniel. Which video was that? But I'm glad it helped.

Oh, and how long was the track? in minutes and seconds?

Alfian · Post by **Alfian** » January 14th, 2013, 12:08 am

HI Phil:

The track was 13:39. Sorry I forgot to include that piece of data.

The video was Basic Editing 101.

Daniel

Alfian · Post by **Alfian** » January 19th, 2013, 3:26 pm

Hi Phil:

I've recorded 3 and am doing some edits right now. Do you not want it?

Also - I see that chapters one and two, which I have recorded are listed as available. I don't understand.

Daniel

Post by **philchenevert** » January 19th, 2013, 3:41 pm

Alfian wrote:Hi Phil:
I've recorded 3 and am doing some edits right now. Do you not want it?
Also - I see that chapters one and two, which I have recorded are listed as available. I don't understand.
Daniel

Yes, yes I do want it.

The others are just a temporary glitch and will be back very soon.

Alfian · Post by **Alfian** » January 19th, 2013, 4:51 pm

Section 03 has been posted.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_03_fleuron.mp3

Daniel

Alfian · Post by **Alfian** » January 19th, 2013, 4:52 pm

Oops, I forgot again.

Section 03 is 15:43

Daniel

Post by **philchenevert** » January 19th, 2013, 5:04 pm

Alfian wrote:Section 03 has been posted.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_03_fleuron.mp3
Daniel

got it

sritchie1952 · Post by **sritchie1952** » January 24th, 2013, 9:08 pm

Happy New Year! I am submitting Chapter XI for your review.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_11_fleuron.mp3
time 6:22

Thank you. Sheri Ritchie

Post by **philchenevert** » January 24th, 2013, 11:29 pm

sritchie1952 wrote:Happy New Year! I am submitting Chapter XI for your review.
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_11_fleuron.mp3
time 6:22
Thank you. Sheri Ritchie

And thank YOU Sheri. Petunia the Perky Penguin

will put this into the Magic Window for proof

listening.

Post by **dlolso21** » January 28th, 2013, 9:04 pm

Could I have section 06 - THE MAN-ROACH please ?

Post by **philchenevert** » January 28th, 2013, 9:11 pm

dlolso21 wrote:Could I have section 06 - THE MAN-ROACH please ?

Ah! So you have risen to the bait, eh? Yes you may indeed.

lilybelladonna · Post by **lilybelladonna** » January 29th, 2013, 5:16 am

Sorry for the delay! Here is Section 12: Grim Develops:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_12_fleuron.mp3

The length is 17:57.

I'm currently editing Section 13; I should have it in within the next day or two. Thank you for your patience.

Post by **philchenevert** » January 29th, 2013, 7:54 am

lilybelladonna wrote:Sorry for the delay! Here is Section 12: Grim Develops:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/phi/grimstoryofapike_12_fleuron.mp3
The length is 17:57.
I'm currently editing Section 13; I should have it in within the next day or two. Thank you for your patience.

Got it. No problem and thanks for helping this poor pike out.

sonnethaiku · Post by **sonnethaiku** » January 29th, 2013, 8:03 am

Enjoyable reading on Section 1. Nice work, Alfian!

Here are my PL notes on Section 1. Updating the MW now.

word "dull" is missing at 1:03; should read "large, dull, malicious eyes" (I wouldn't point this out if it was the only thing since this isn't a Word Perfect requested PL and it doesn't change the meaning. As there are a few other things, I thought I'd point this out if you were inclined to fix it while you were working on the other fixes.)

plosive at 4:12 "tiger-beetles"

small pop at 4:39 "anything resting"

plosive at 11:48 "voracious heads"

plosive at 5:04 "captive"

two plosives at 8:11 "from time to time"

plosive at 8:25 "With a hiss"

plosive at 9:59 "head foremost"

Thank you for being so patient with me to return to LV and continue my work here. I really appreciate it.

~ Chessie Joy

sonnethaiku · Post by **sonnethaiku** » January 29th, 2013, 8:31 am

Here are my PL notes on Section 2. Another lovely reading, Alfian!

The audio seems doubled - 0:00-0:03 <---- see ETA note

plosive at 2:13 "remarkable power"

plosive at 12:08 "timid"

The click of a mouse is audible in the final second of the reading.

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Edited to Add - Alfian, there is no audio-doubling inherent in the recording. I was hearing an oddity on my end due to my software. My deepest apologies. 21 Feb 2013