[COMPLETE] The Iliad - Trans into English Blank Verse - law

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » February 12th, 2014, 8:53 pm

Thank you!!

I fixed up section 26. That should be ok.

Here is Section 27. Book 21

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_27_homer.mp3

59:48

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » February 13th, 2014, 12:50 pm

Section 26 is PL OK after spot-check

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » February 14th, 2014, 1:09 pm

PL note section 27:
22:48 - I can't hear the underlined words 'A God in might! to Phoebus then his speech
the deeply-eddying Tiver thus adress'd:
"God of the silver bow, great son of Jove'
57:40 - underlined words are missing in the recording 'He said, and threw with stalwart hand the spear;
Achilles' leg he struck, below the knee,
Nor missed his aim, and loudly'

All the rest is great! Well read, and well done

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » February 16th, 2014, 2:55 pm

Thanks, Katherine! I'll get on that immediately.

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » February 23rd, 2014, 3:32 pm

Hi Katherine. Thank you!

I fixed up section 27. That should be all good.

Here is the next section. Book 22.

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_28_homer.mp3

51:33

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » March 1st, 2014, 3:07 pm

Section 27 is PL OK!

PL note section 28:
37:35 - repeat 'The Greeks around him throng'd,
Gazing on Hector's noble form and face
The Greeks around him throng'd,
Gazing on Hector's noble form and face
And none approch'd that did not add a wound'

Everything else is great!

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » March 1st, 2014, 6:28 pm

Awesome! Thank you.

Looks like Book 23 is going to be a two parter. it runs about an hour and a half all together.

here's part 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_29_homer.mp3

44:33

- Mike

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » March 8th, 2014, 3:53 pm

Section 28 is PL OK after spotcheck

Post by **chocoholic** » March 9th, 2014, 7:18 am

Hi, Mike, I was poking around my Uploader folder and I noticed that you'd recently re-uploaded sections 02 and 09. Would you tell us what changes you made so they can be checked? Thanks!

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » March 10th, 2014, 8:53 pm

Hi Laurie Ann.

I think I moved them from the earlier url, the share/uploads/law one to the uploads/chocoholic one. No changes.

Post by **chocoholic** » March 11th, 2014, 5:42 am

OK, thanks!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » March 11th, 2014, 5:53 am

PL note 29:
11:00 - I hear 'but together, as our youth
was spent together in my father's house'
instead of 'thy'
25:45 - repeat 'He lay, while round the edges of the pyre,
Horses and men commix'd
while round the edges of the pyre,
Horses and men commix'dthe rest were burnt

Great work! Not much left to go now!

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » March 11th, 2014, 3:57 pm

Hold on to your hats!!!

Here is the rest of the book!!!

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_30_homer.mp3

43:32

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_31_homer.mp3

53:49

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_32_homer.mp3

28:24

I fixed 29, also

marmenta · Post by **marmenta** » March 11th, 2014, 6:24 pm

Oh! I thought the preface was pretty bass-ee. So I just took a little of the low end.

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » March 15th, 2014, 3:19 pm

Section 29 is now PL OK!

One small note on section 30:
12:42 - underlined words should not be there 'To whom Antilochus with prudent speech:
for I, Have pateince with me yet, for I, O Menelaus'

Great reading!