Oh, but I was enjoying Caprisha talking soooo much!ChuckW wrote:Oh, and I think section 14 has already been PLed! So no need to listen to that one!
EDIT: The only sections that need PL-ing are 1, 5, and 9. Unfortunately, section 5 is only the second half of the story (the other half hasn't been recorded yet).
SECOND EDIT: THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Thanks Cat! I appreciate it.catrose wrote:Oh, but I was enjoying Caprisha talking soooo much!ChuckW wrote:Oh, and I think section 14 has already been PLed! So no need to listen to that one!
EDIT: The only sections that need PL-ing are 1, 5, and 9. Unfortunately, section 5 is only the second half of the story (the other half hasn't been recorded yet).
SECOND EDIT: THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Section 5 PL OK!
ChuckW wrote: Hey Ferngirl. Great job making your way through this weird little story.Your reading is quite good. I have some PL notes though... just minor things, really.
* At the beginning of the file, you have about seven seconds of silence before you got into the intro. For LV recordings, we require that you include about .05 or 1 second of silence.
* At the end, you need to include five seconds of silence after saying, "End of Section ______."
* I also noticed an odd sound in the background of your recording (as well as an alarm or something going "ding!"). The latter sound isn't a big problem (I doubt it could be removed), but you might want to see if some noise removal can help with the consistent background noise. I mean, if it depreciates the quality of your recording, then it's certainly manageable. But I thought I should bring it up regardless.
Again, great job. These are all very minor, technical quibbles, so you've definitely got some mad Librivox skills.
JoFriday21 wrote:Hi Kandice!
PL Notes for Section 9!
You will need to do some noise cleaning - I can hear what sounds like a basketball game on TV behind your recording
4:52, 7:15 - You stopped abruptly.
6:10 - Sounds like you missed something in editing or said "hmm"
6:41, 7:24 - There is an extended silence
6:57 - There is a "bang" or "thunk" noise right before you start talking which should be easy to take out
7:43 - It should read "...drank in the appreciative comment of the crowd..." instead of "...appreciative moment..."
8:56 - It should read "...his voice, already sorely tried..." instead of "...already sorely tired..."
13:24 - It should read "...and brought on a row that culminated..." instead of "...row that cumulated..."
14:15 - It should read "...as did his camera operator..." instead of "...and did his camera operator..." (only suggest this as a fix because it changes the meaning...)
18:31 - You missed a few words. It should read "It's just soap - and a damp cloth--" "Damp cloth be hanged" instead of "It's just soap - and a damp cloth can be hanged"
You don't need to include the Librivox disclaimer and your name at the end of the recording since it is already included at the beginning
Overall, I really enjoyed it! You did a great job - what an excellent story!!
Chuck, if any of these notes you don't agree with you know the drill - use 'em or ditch 'em!
JoFriday21 wrote:Hi Kandice!
PL Notes for Section 9!
You will need to do some noise cleaning - I can hear what sounds like a basketball game on TV behind your recording
4:52, 7:15 - You stopped abruptly.
6:10 - Sounds like you missed something in editing or said "hmm"
6:41, 7:24 - There is an extended silence
6:57 - There is a "bang" or "thunk" noise right before you start talking which should be easy to take out
7:43 - It should read "...drank in the appreciative comment of the crowd..." instead of "...appreciative moment..."
8:56 - It should read "...his voice, already sorely tried..." instead of "...already sorely tired..."
13:24 - It should read "...and brought on a row that culminated..." instead of "...row that cumulated..."
14:15 - It should read "...as did his camera operator..." instead of "...and did his camera operator..." (only suggest this as a fix because it changes the meaning...)
18:31 - You missed a few words. It should read "It's just soap - and a damp cloth--" "Damp cloth be hanged" instead of "It's just soap - and a damp cloth can be hanged"
You don't need to include the Librivox disclaimer and your name at the end of the recording since it is already included at the beginning
Overall, I really enjoyed it! You did a great job - what an excellent story!!
Chuck, if any of these notes you don't agree with you know the drill - use 'em or ditch 'em!
Thanks Kandi. I'll give it a listen ASAP!kandi1234 wrote:here is the new section 9! running time is 18:50!
kandi
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/moviesandhollywood001_09_sargent.mp3
Lol!catrose wrote:Oh, but I was enjoying Caprisha talking soooo much!ChuckW wrote:Oh, and I think section 14 has already been PLed! So no need to listen to that one!
EDIT: The only sections that need PL-ing are 1, 5, and 9. Unfortunately, section 5 is only the second half of the story (the other half hasn't been recorded yet).
SECOND EDIT: THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Section 5 PL OK!
kandi1234 wrote:here is the new section 9! running time is 18:50!
kandi
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/moviesandhollywood001_09_sargent.mp3
It should be "drank in the appreciative comment" instead of "appreciative moment." 
aidanbrack wrote:Here's my section:
The Punishment That Fitted The Crime - 06:25
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/tg/moviesandhollywood001_07_fay.mp3