COMPLETE The Desire of Ages by Ellen White - kd

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Post by ArleneJoyce » January 11th, 2018, 8:00 pm

Chapter 76 is PL OK now.
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Post by ArleneJoyce » January 11th, 2018, 9:55 pm

Chapter 77 only has a few edits needed for such a long chapter!

at 4:30, I hear "but it was not lawful" instead of "but it is not lawful"
at 9:13, I hear "then I should not" instead of "that I should not"
at 15:45, I hear "power to release him or to" instead of "power to release or to"
at 36:55, I hear "afterwards" instead of "afterward"
at 38:00, I hear "accepted him whom" instead of "accepted him who"
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Post by Donald » January 14th, 2018, 1:06 pm

<Chapter 78> uploaded.
Will get those fixes done on 77.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » January 15th, 2018, 9:07 pm

Just a couple (maybe three) edits needed to Chapter 78:

at 3:59, I think I hear "The wonder at the hatred" instead of "They wonder at the hatred". You might decide I'm wrong, and it was just a fast word.
at 6:10, I hear "When Christ rose into" instead of "When Christ rode into" -- hurrying the story along a little?
at 18:06, I hear "the due rewards" instead of "the due reward"
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Post by Donald » March 17th, 2018, 7:17 pm

I hate bronchitis. Knocked me out for 2 months this year, continual hacking cough that made reading pretty much impossible.
BUT, doing much better now, and back to work!
Chapter 78 corrections made.

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Post by Donald » April 2nd, 2018, 7:13 pm

Chapter 79 uploaded and ready for PL

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Post by ArleneJoyce » April 3rd, 2018, 7:40 pm

Chapter 78 is PL OK. (If you read a previous version of this post, ignore the part about the double upload of Chapter 78. Brain skip.)

I hear three things differently than I read them for Chapter 79:

At 1:46, I hear "as easy as one can cast" instead of "as easily as one can cast"
At 15:29, I hear "the result of their own choice" instead of "the results of their own choice"
At 16:57, I hear "comprehended the result of the sacrifice" instead of "comprehended the results of the sacrifice"
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Post by Donald » August 1st, 2018, 8:01 pm

Chapter 80 uploaded.
I'll get those patches done to 79

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Post by Donald » August 6th, 2018, 6:36 pm

Chapter 79 corrections made.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » August 7th, 2018, 8:00 pm

Chapter 80 only has 3 things:

At 12:46, I hear "This" instead of "That"
At 18:47, there is a repeat starting "but during the time..." It sounds like a correction, with the second one being correct.
At 19:11, I hear "suffering" instead of "sufferings"

I'll go check out the corrections for Chapter 79. I don't see that you have yet made corrections to Chapter 77. Did you upload them, and I'm just overlooking the message?
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Post by ArleneJoyce » August 7th, 2018, 8:05 pm

Chapter 79 is PL OK.
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Post by Donald » August 25th, 2018, 6:12 pm

You are absolutely right. I didn't get those 79 fixes done.
So, <done now>
I have 81 recorded, will have initial edit done soon hopefully.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » August 30th, 2018, 10:32 am

Fixes to 77 sound good. Marked PL OK.
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Post by Donald » September 8th, 2018, 6:40 pm

Chapter 81 Uploaded and ready for proof listening.

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Post by ArleneJoyce » September 8th, 2018, 9:06 pm

For Chapter 80:

at 1:09 I hear "become" instead of "became"
at 1:24 I hear an extra "a" in "face of mortal"
at 5:28 I hear an extra "of" in "tell no one the things"
at 5:55 I hear "sentries" instead of "sentinels"
at 10:41 I think I hear "formed" instead of "performed", but it might just be clipped -- you'll have to see what you think
Alvarado, Texas is repeated at the end
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